Christmas Anthology
Two Duotrain Poems34 total reviews
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Sally, this is a superbly written and displayed piece of work. Fantastic picture, and your two Duotrain Poems (a new form to me) are written in good abcb rhyme, maintained throughout. Beautifully worded, you tell the story so well. The angel almost sinks into your words - stare long enough and I swear she moves. A worthy entry to the contest which I think is a strong contender. Love Dorothy xx
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Hello Sally, this is a superbly written and displayed piece of work. Fantastic picture, and your two Duotrain Poems (a new form to me) are written in good abcb rhyme, maintained throughout. Beautifully worded, you tell the story so well. The angel almost sinks into your words - stare long enough and I swear she moves. A worthy entry to the contest which I think is a strong contender. Love Dorothy xx
Comment Written 10-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the beautiful review and generous six stars, dear Dorothy. I'm so honored and blessed. I thought the angel very real, too. I spent weeks searching for just the right one for this post. Sending you my best today as always and blessings for Christmas,
Sally XOs...xo....
Comment from Debbie Pope
Thank you for sharing your heart and the Christmas story. Your faith is uplifting and your gift with words is moving.
I hope you and yours are blessed this Christmas. You clearly have your focus on the meaning of Christmas.
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Thank you for sharing your heart and the Christmas story. Your faith is uplifting and your gift with words is moving.
I hope you and yours are blessed this Christmas. You clearly have your focus on the meaning of Christmas.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the lovely review, Debbie dear! Sal XOs....
Comment from BethShelby
This is a beautiful Christmas poem. You've told the Christmas story all over again. This is my favorite verse.
"Arise O Earth, for your Lord comes!
Turn from the Jester's mirth!
For unto you is born this day,
One of a virgin's birth!"
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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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This is a beautiful Christmas poem. You've told the Christmas story all over again. This is my favorite verse.
"Arise O Earth, for your Lord comes!
Turn from the Jester's mirth!
For unto you is born this day,
One of a virgin's birth!"
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Comment Written 10-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the wonderful review and generous compliments, dear Beth! Sal XOs....
Comment from Ulla
Hi Sally, I'm actually singing along as I'm writing this review. I used to perform 'Hallelujah' with the chorus I belonged to in college. We became quite famous in Scandinavia. 'Zahle's Pigekor' it was called. But that's a by de by. I loved your poem. What a lovely contribution for Christmas. Ulla:)))
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Hi Sally, I'm actually singing along as I'm writing this review. I used to perform 'Hallelujah' with the chorus I belonged to in college. We became quite famous in Scandinavia. 'Zahle's Pigekor' it was called. But that's a by de by. I loved your poem. What a lovely contribution for Christmas. Ulla:)))
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Comment Written 10-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
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An, thank you so much for the beautiful review and generous compliments, dear Ulla. I'm delighted!
All my best,
Sal XOs....xo.....
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You are most welcome, and once again congrats on you being the writer of the month! I know the feeling. I was there in 2017. Enjoy it! Ulla xx
