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Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Have You Seen My Mummy"Little stories for children in rhyme
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Comment from Jenny Kartchner
An absolutely delightful poem for children, and us all. There is so much possibility in 'working' with a caterpillar/butterfly piece. I love the repetition because kids go for that. I also think it was a nice touch that you used a scientific word, chrysalis. I'm glad you didn't bombard it with them though.
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An absolutely delightful poem for children, and us all. There is so much possibility in 'working' with a caterpillar/butterfly piece. I love the repetition because kids go for that. I also think it was a nice touch that you used a scientific word, chrysalis. I'm glad you didn't bombard it with them though.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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Thank you, Jenny. No, one scientific word is enough for them to master at a time. When a child asks what that word means, the parents can explain in a magical way, because that's what it is, magic. I'm glad you enjoyed it, thank you! :)
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are joyful, interesting, fun and creative. This is
a perfect poem for children - I enjoyed it very myself. The poem flows
and connects well. The artwork is exceptional and comments these words.
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The author's words are joyful, interesting, fun and creative. This is
a perfect poem for children - I enjoyed it very myself. The poem flows
and connects well. The artwork is exceptional and comments these words.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2021
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Thank you for this really lovely review, Harmony13! I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. :) xx
Comment from Susan Larson
Really cute poem. Little kids would love the singsong rhythm and the illustrations are really cute. It would make a cute book. Is that in your plans? It sounds like something I'd have had in my class when I taught preschool.
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Really cute poem. Little kids would love the singsong rhythm and the illustrations are really cute. It would make a cute book. Is that in your plans? It sounds like something I'd have had in my class when I taught preschool.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2021
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Thank you, Susan. I've had so many reviewers ask if it will be published, I have a few more children's poems on here, so I might just put them all into a picture book. Thank you for such a lovely review. :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written rhyming poem for children that starts with the caterpillar seeking his mom, but no-one seems to see her passing by as a caterpillar but they definitely saw her passing by as a butterfly.
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A very well-written rhyming poem for children that starts with the caterpillar seeking his mom, but no-one seems to see her passing by as a caterpillar but they definitely saw her passing by as a butterfly.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2021
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Thank you, Sandra! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Comment from alexisleech
I love it! This brought a smile to my face as I read it. Not only does it display perfect rhyme, it is educational as well, which is always a good thing in children's poetry.
Alexis xxx
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I love it! This brought a smile to my face as I read it. Not only does it display perfect rhyme, it is educational as well, which is always a good thing in children's poetry.
Alexis xxx
Comment Written 20-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for the six stars, Alexis, and the lovely review. :) xx
Comment from dragonpoet
Sandra,
This is a cute story about how bugs don't understand that in mom is a butterly and not a caterpillar. He should of described his mom to them.
Maybe he didn't realize his mom changed to a butterfly until he did.
I like all the illustrations.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
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Sandra,
This is a cute story about how bugs don't understand that in mom is a butterly and not a caterpillar. He should of described his mom to them.
Maybe he didn't realize his mom changed to a butterfly until he did.
I like all the illustrations.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 20-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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Thank you, Joan! How did you know it was me? It's a blind contest, LOL I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. :)
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You're welcome, Sandra.
I got it from your portfolio on my fan list.
Joan
Comment from Wendy G
What a lovely rhyming poem for children, and how beautifully illustrated. You must get it published! It is perfect with its repetition, and its teaching of information about caterpillars and butterflies, its rhythm and flow. Good wishes for the contest.
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What a lovely rhyming poem for children, and how beautifully illustrated. You must get it published! It is perfect with its repetition, and its teaching of information about caterpillars and butterflies, its rhythm and flow. Good wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much, Wendy! And thank you for the good luck wishes. :) xx
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is such a joyful presentation for the contest. I expect children would adore this poem and your artwork has added to the magic here. A tuneful melodic metre and fine rhymes too, a pleasure to read and I reckon you have a winner here, love Dolly x
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This is such a joyful presentation for the contest. I expect children would adore this poem and your artwork has added to the magic here. A tuneful melodic metre and fine rhymes too, a pleasure to read and I reckon you have a winner here, love Dolly x
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What a lovely review! Thank you, Dolly. :) xx
Comment from Patty Palmer
Such a sweet and fun children's poem. Any kiddie would enjoy this. It has a fun rhythm and rhyme. And the story is positive and surprising at the end. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
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Such a sweet and fun children's poem. Any kiddie would enjoy this. It has a fun rhythm and rhyme. And the story is positive and surprising at the end. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 20-Jan-2021
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Thank you so very much for the six stars, and wonderful review, Patty! :)
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You're welcome. It's such a cute story in your poem!
Patty
Comment from Mary Vigasin
What an endearing poem. I loved the ending that he turned into a butterfly as did his mother. The rhyming and the artwork was fun and creative.
Good luck in the contest.
Regards
Mary
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What an endearing poem. I loved the ending that he turned into a butterfly as did his mother. The rhyming and the artwork was fun and creative.
Good luck in the contest.
Regards
Mary
Comment Written 20-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much, Mary! :)
