Comment from equestrik

Excellent

This is a good write for the "Acrostic Poetry Contest" I love the picture as well as your writing. You have inclued a great deal here about he splendid beauty and awe inspiring clouds.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021

Hi Equestrik,

I am so thankful for your excellent review and most kind words. My face is glowing :-)

I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

Have a great week,
Senyai

reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021

Hi Equestrik,

I am so thankful for your excellent review and most kind words. My face is glowing :-)

I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

Have a great week,
Senyai

Comment from amahra

Excellent

You have written a very fine Acrostic Poem, rich with words so spicy they roll off my tongue. The picture you chose is awesome and compliments the words of your poem excellently. Great job.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021

Hi Amahra,

Thank you humbly for such a lovely review and kind words. I am so honored by your words.

Always,
Senyai

reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021

Hi Amahra,

Thank you humbly for such a lovely review and kind words. I am so honored by your words.

Always,
Senyai

Comment from royowen

Excellent

This is a lovely presentation, a a very worthy entry in this acrostic poetry contest. Some beautifully written language displayed in this classy competition entry and it was a pleasure to read well done, good luck. Blessings Roy

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021

Hi Roy,

Thank you kindly for a most eloquent review and kind thoughts. I am honored by your words, sir.

Have a great week :-)
Senyai

reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021

Hi Roy,

Thank you kindly for a most eloquent review and kind thoughts. I am honored by your words, sir.

Have a great week :-)
Senyai

reply by royowen on 29-Jun-2021

Bless you

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

You have written a beautiful poem that takes the reader to another place. I like the image of being alone and adrift in a boat, it adds to the feel of observing the clouds. Excellent acrostic form and lines that create vivid scenes.

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 Comment Written 28-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021

Hi Mermaids,

Thank you kindly for such a lovely review and interesting thoughts. I am honored by your words :-)

Have a great week,
Senyai

reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021

Hi Mermaids,

Thank you kindly for such a lovely review and interesting thoughts. I am honored by your words :-)

Have a great week,
Senyai

Comment from Bonnie Seach

Excellent

The poem is contest compliant. The accompanying picture underscores the theme. 'Sail' versus 'adrift' might pose a problem for the reader because "sail" implies progress of a boat on water whereas "adrift" suggests the opposite.
The poem consists of numerous words, which in themselves are impressive. My rule of thumb to attract readers is, "write not to impress, but to impart". Best wishes at the booths

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 Comment Written 28-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021

Hi Bonnie,

I am honored by your lovely review and revelations. I will take all of your thoughts into consideration and appreciate such a detailed account.

I am honored by your taking the time to critique and review my work!

Have a great week :-)
Senyai

reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021

Hi Bonnie,

I am honored by your lovely review and revelations. I will take all of your thoughts into consideration and appreciate such a detailed account.

I am honored by your taking the time to critique and review my work!

Have a great week :-)
Senyai