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Comment from nancy_e_davis
Exceptional
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I'm sure Gladys has been threatened in some way, and that made her the information leak. Maybe they threatened her invalid sister's life if she didn't co-operate with them. Anyhow The good guys are making a little headway. Soon Grants mother and brother will join Rapier behind bars and Tania will be safe. Good job! Nancy:)

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2021
    Aw, thank you, Nancy. The next part is already to go, and I'm half way through the final part. Two to go!! You're not far out with your speculation, Nancy. You'd make a brilliant detective. :)) Thank you so much for the six stars, my friend, and the lovely review. You're a dear friend. Warm hugs, Sandra xxx
    I read you last chapter and added a bit more to my original review but all it said was my review had been updated. It was another exellent chapter. xxxxx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Exceptional
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So Gladys' sister was either threatened or injured so she would give Rapier or Grant's mother information on where Grant was going. I am still worried about Rapier. This seemed way to easy. I really like this story.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2021
    I've already written the next part, I couldn't stop when I'd finished this one. Now I'm into the last chapter and an epilogue. Nearly there, Barbara, thanks so much for the six stars and this lovely review. Warm hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Excellent
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This panoramic story has climax after climax after climax, with at least one more to "come"! First, the arrest of Colin, next the consummation, then the capture of Rapier, and now building up to Gladys ... ? The interactions and dialog are superb!

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 Comment Written 25-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2021
    Thank you so very much, Liz. I've already written the next part and I'm writing the final chapter now. I couldn't stop at the end of this one, I had to get the meetings written. Thanks, my friend! :)) Sandra xx
reply by Elizabeth Emerald on 25-Jul-2021
    Can't wait! Only two more to go?
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2021
    And an epilogue, but you know what my chapters are like, they are almost novel length in themselves!!! Lol.
Comment from Begin Again
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Hello, Sandra....

Another excellent chapter as the good guy brings in the evil one. Though things are never just cut and dried... Confronting his mother before they arrest her and checking on Gladys could bring us a few surprises. As usual, I love the story and how it moves so smoothly from one thing to another. Twenty five years working for the family... puts Gladys under a lot of pressure by someone I think. Can't wait to see what Grant uncovers.

Another good chapter until next Sunday... too long to wait!

Smiles and hugs, Carol

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 Comment Written 25-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2021
    Thank you so much, Carol, I have next weeks chapter all ready to do, and have started the final chapter. Then it will just be the epilogue. Finally! I'm glad you are still enjoying it. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
reply by Begin Again on 25-Jul-2021
    oh no, I hate to think of it coming to an end... I so looked forward to my Sundays with you and with Barbara's story. I've got three chapters outline and one almost completed except for a review... I always miss thing even when I go back and re-read it. have you got another story brewing? I hope so!

    Smiles and hugs..Carol
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2021
    Yes, I have, it's been buzzing around my head for ages. I can't wait to start plotting it out. It's in rough notes at the moment. xxx
reply by Begin Again on 25-Jul-2021
    Good for you! I'll be waiting...but first let's enjoy the wrap-up of this one. Awesome!