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He Donned

Humility - a poem

46 total reviews 
Comment from Ritsal
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It's all too easy to forget the true meaning of the season and the reason for celebrating. You reminded us in a lovely fashion. Best wishes, and
Merry Christmas!

Rita

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
    Thanks so much Rita, for these excellent comments and a great review, merry Christmas and blessings Roy
Comment from Sugarray77
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Thank you for turning our focus onto Jesus and the real reason we celebrate Christmas. I loved the rhymes and gentle flow and think this is a lovely piece of poetry, Roy. Merry Christmas!!

Melissa

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
    Thanks Melissa, for these super comments and review, merry Christmas and blessings Roy
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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This is a lovely poem for Christmas. The story that we all know so well, but told with good, solid rhymes that resound clearly throughout. As I've already told you, my grandson will be certain you're writing just for him.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
    Thanks so much Kate, for these excellent comments and a great review, merry Christmas and blessings Roy
Comment from Boogienights
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A lovely poem about the true meaning of Christmas. You have a way with words, your poetry always captures my heart. I hope you and your family have a very merry Christmas and a happy new year. :)

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
    Thanks so much for these excellent comments and a great review, merry Christmas and blessings Roy
Comment from Sanku
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happy Christmas to you and your family. I enjoyed your Christmas poem written in your usual perfect style.I particularly liked the expression that Christ donned humility for frail humanity...
have a great Christmas.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
    Thanks so much for these excellent comments and a great review, merry Christmas and blessings Roy
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Good Morning, Roy!
A beautiful spiritual rendering of Christ's birth. His story never grows old, and all through this year, you surely have graced FanStory with His story and His impact on your life. Thank you!
And may you and yours have a glorious Christmas!
Here's to 2022!

Blessings,
diane

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
    Thanks so much Diane, for these excellent comments and a great review, merry Christmas and blessings Roy
Comment from Ben Colder
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Sorry not to offer a higher rating; out of six for now. This poem explains it all. One blood atonement that offers life back to the giver in obedience. We are nothing but He is Lord.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
    Thanks again bro, for these excellent comments and a great review blessings Merry Christmas Roy
Comment from JLR
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Roy, thank you for your terrific poem about the most precious Christmas story that has touched every life - since the beginning of His birth. I am always eager to read from the perspective of another believer those golden gems that spark the poet's words. Blessings to you always!

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
    Thanks Jim, for these marvellous comments and a super review blessings Merry Christmas Roy
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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' He donned ', is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
    Thanks Duchess for these marvellous comments and a super review blessings Merry Christmas Roy
Comment from Paul McFarland
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A very nice Christmas poem, Roy. "Arrayed in flesh, a savior born" is a great line. Although there are many stories written about the birth of Christ, it never gets old.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
    Thanks Paul, for these marvellous comments and a super review blessings Merry Christmas Roy