Comment from karenina

Excellent

I'd pretty much give my left arm for some "balmy" in my life right now. It's zero degrees out...wind chill of -18 degrees. Your lune is warming me!

Karenina

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2022

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

This is really pretty, I love the image it creates in the mind. The picture you chose firs your words perfectly and I think this will do well in the contest. :)

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022

Thanks so much Boogie... honored.

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

You have used thirteen well-chosen syllables to describe an awe-inspiring sight in nature. Sun and rain--essentials for life. I'm sorry about the 4, but you have a misspelled word. Misspellings really stand out in short poems.

rating revised after poem was revised

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022

Thanks for the help... I was correcting and somehow divine came out wrong... I'm hoping you will reread... thanks.

reply by Janice Canerdy on 20-Jan-2022

I changed it to a 5. :-)

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022

Thanks so much for your thoughtfulness... When I'm typing in almost white lettering my typing goes wonky... so thanks xo

Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Excellent

This is a nicely written lune poem but the grey wording on the blue background is too dark you can hardly see it. Beautiful photo good luck on the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022

Thanks so much Joanne... I so, appreciate your heads up... I had to edit so I turned the letters black and forgot to put them back... again thanks...xo

reply by Joanne Gill-Maddick on 20-Jan-2022

Your welcome

reply by Joanne Gill-Maddick on 21-Jan-2022

Your welcome

Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Excellent

' Hope Emerges Through The Rain ' , is short, succinct and delightfully
descriptive. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a
pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. Please let
me know how you get on?

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022

thanks so very much duchess... xo

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 20-Jan-2022

My friend you're very welcome..xo

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022

I will xo

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 20-Jan-2022

I'm pleased to know xo

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 21-Jan-2022

Good xo

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

A lovely lune poem for the contest. You paint a beautiful picture with just a few well chosen words a a wonderful message as well.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022

Thanks for reading and your wonderful thoughts. xo

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice image and presentation.
-Thanks for the note.
-You wrote a very good lune with
a good topic and imagery.
-I like the first line very much;
it is creative and creates a good word picture.
-A very good concluding line, too.
-A very good entry; good luck!!

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022

Thanks so much for your very informative review... so appreciate. xo

reply by Pam (respa) on 21-Jan-2022

You are very welcome.

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

I like this line poetry because it is well written. It is clear and concise. I have enjoyed reading it. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022

Thanks Raul... very honored!

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very nice and well written Lune poem you have penned for the writing prompt contest. You used very good descriptive words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022

Thanks Teri... honored.!

Comment from Father Flaps

Excellent

Hi Mystery Author,
Correct me if I'm wrong, but the rules say to write a Lune poem of 5-3-5 syllables. Your poem is 3-5-3 syllables.
The proper form would look something like this, for example:
pregnant clouds spill rain
while above
balmy sunshine warms

I hope you are able to edit before the close of the contest. I didn't drop a star because the 3-5-3 poem is still good. I like the idea that rain can be appreciated. I love the rain, especially in the fall when I'm walking in the woods. It really is a "devine gift".
Good Luck with your editing.
Cheers,
Kimbob

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022

Thanks for the heads up... I just corrected and thank you for letting me know. xo

reply by Father Flaps on 20-Jan-2022

No prob, Mystery Writer! We all blunder once in a while. All the Best!
Kimbob