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Pistol Packin' Petticoat

A prequel to Tin Stars and Yankee Gold

31 total reviews 
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Good
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Needs a little work to get another star.
I didn't see why you made a deal about the Walker Colt with no following use of it.
"How about a dollar a day and room and board, Sarah here is a fair to middlin' cook? - need to close the quote
But when the fell out from bottom ... - huh?
independent streak in her.She much preferred - space
Granny had maade her - made
The Elmer was in shock - The Elmer?
and I'll part ways with you.? - no question mark
we're burnin' daylight" - needs a period
Best wishes

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 Comment Written 07-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2022
    I went through and fixed the errors you pointed out, Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my story..