God On Dell
God orders a gift of rebirth40 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was excellent, Alcreator Litt Dear. You used the few twenty-one words for your spiritual flash fiction story, and came up with the perfect story. Very well done, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra
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That was excellent, Alcreator Litt Dear. You used the few twenty-one words for your spiritual flash fiction story, and came up with the perfect story. Very well done, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra
Comment Written 08-Feb-2022
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is spiritual and expressive. When I got saved, I was reborn. When I draw my last breath, I will be in Heaven, that change being another level of new birth.
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This is spiritual and expressive. When I got saved, I was reborn. When I draw my last breath, I will be in Heaven, that change being another level of new birth.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
Comment from Shirley McLain
What a lovely story that you wrote in twenty one words. You did a great job, and I didn't find any errors. In my mind, this is as real as it can get. Good luck in the contest, and have a great evening. Shirley
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What a lovely story that you wrote in twenty one words. You did a great job, and I didn't find any errors. In my mind, this is as real as it can get. Good luck in the contest, and have a great evening. Shirley
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
Comment from Begin Again
You've created a wonderful blessing by changing the crisis to a new beginning at the hands of the Lord. WEll done. Good luck in the contest.
Smiles, Carol
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You've created a wonderful blessing by changing the crisis to a new beginning at the hands of the Lord. WEll done. Good luck in the contest.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
Comment from Earl Corp
First, kudos for telling a complete story in just 21 words. Very nice job. The way I read this is there is a reincarnation involved. I s that right? Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.
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First, kudos for telling a complete story in just 21 words. Very nice job. The way I read this is there is a reincarnation involved. I s that right? Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
Comment from Ulla
You certainly managed to write a spiritual story within the required word count. Well done. I do hope you do very well in the contest. Good luck. All best, Ulla:))
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You certainly managed to write a spiritual story within the required word count. Well done. I do hope you do very well in the contest. Good luck. All best, Ulla:))
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
Comment from Terry Broxson
A good story with only a few words to work with for this contest, looks like you got the bases of the contest covered, good luck. I guess Dell could have died of anything, still gone to heaven and been rebirthed, but you did make it topical. Good job.
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A good story with only a few words to work with for this contest, looks like you got the bases of the contest covered, good luck. I guess Dell could have died of anything, still gone to heaven and been rebirthed, but you did make it topical. Good job.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
Comment from royowen
It's good that he went to heaven, but rebirth must happen while we're here, it's too late when we're there. "It is appointed for every man to die, and then the judgement" Hebrews 9:27. Well done, blessings Roy
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It's good that he went to heaven, but rebirth must happen while we're here, it's too late when we're there. "It is appointed for every man to die, and then the judgement" Hebrews 9:27. Well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
Comment from Raul1
This story meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
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This story meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
Comment from Heather Burroughs
While your poem was simple, it was beautiful. You have all the necessary requirements for the contest. Great job.
Thanks for sharing. Many blessings to you.
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While your poem was simple, it was beautiful. You have all the necessary requirements for the contest. Great job.
Thanks for sharing. Many blessings to you.
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2022