Horizon
This was a sunrise that was completely Poem Worthy!62 total reviews
Comment from Regina Elliott
You've created with your
photograph and poem an
exquisite God and nature
poem. Bravo. Best Wishes for
the contest. Have a blessed
weekend, and a creative one too. ~
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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You've created with your
photograph and poem an
exquisite God and nature
poem. Bravo. Best Wishes for
the contest. Have a blessed
weekend, and a creative one too. ~
Comment Written 25-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Once again, you've been so very kind with your review & your support!
And once again, I thank you from the bottom of my heart!
Comment from RGstar
You created a good imagery here, with thoughts of the contest.
The sunrise always a feature to frame, and you incorporated it well.
Wishing you good luck with the competition.
My best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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You created a good imagery here, with thoughts of the contest.
The sunrise always a feature to frame, and you incorporated it well.
Wishing you good luck with the competition.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 25-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thank you once again RG. Your kind review is so appreciated!
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
I agree with you one hundred percent. And the picture is so pretty. And how can someone doubt how everything on earth was created? Things do not just manifest by themselves. If so, we would all be like Samantha on Bewitched, who just twitches her nose. Thank you for the post.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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I agree with you one hundred percent. And the picture is so pretty. And how can someone doubt how everything on earth was created? Things do not just manifest by themselves. If so, we would all be like Samantha on Bewitched, who just twitches her nose. Thank you for the post.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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I thank you once again Carolyn, for your wonderful review! Lol, l loved your reference to Samantha & Bewitched too!!!
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You are welcome.
Comment from dragonpoet
Debi,
Wonderful photo to go with the words. Their is beauty in each season. Though we forget that in Winter. The sunset is always a sign of hope for the new day or season. This poem is spiritual as well as literal.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Debi,
Wonderful photo to go with the words. Their is beauty in each season. Though we forget that in Winter. The sunset is always a sign of hope for the new day or season. This poem is spiritual as well as literal.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 25-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thank you for very kind words & review. You have been so caring as you've reviewed some of my other work as well.
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You're welcome on both accounts, Debi.
Joan
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You're welcome on both accounts, Debi.
Joan
Comment from Jane Jane King
This is a beautifully written poem. I would change the word beautiful to lovely in stanza three to make the rhythm smoother. And remove the word still from Stanza four. Also I would change the word strange to something in stanza two, to avoid repetition. But that is just a matter of preference. Anyway, I share your love of Autumn. It's my favorite season too. Thank you for sharing such a lovely poem.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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This is a beautifully written poem. I would change the word beautiful to lovely in stanza three to make the rhythm smoother. And remove the word still from Stanza four. Also I would change the word strange to something in stanza two, to avoid repetition. But that is just a matter of preference. Anyway, I share your love of Autumn. It's my favorite season too. Thank you for sharing such a lovely poem.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2022
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Thank you Jane for your kind & helpful review. I went in & made the changes, as I absolutely agreed w you. Thanks again & God Bless!
Comment from R.B.Bunn
This was a lovely poem. The change of seasons can signal a change in life too. The rhyme scheme and rhythm were consistent. Everything was well done.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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This was a lovely poem. The change of seasons can signal a change in life too. The rhyme scheme and rhythm were consistent. Everything was well done.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your kind review of my poem. It is truly appreciated!
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Debi,
You have beautifully depicted the colorful aspects of Nature, particularly the sound of Autumn's foot-steps!
Impressive wording; Smooth flow with lovely rhyming scheme.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
Good Luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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Hello Debi,
You have beautifully depicted the colorful aspects of Nature, particularly the sound of Autumn's foot-steps!
Impressive wording; Smooth flow with lovely rhyming scheme.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
Good Luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your kind review of my poem. It is truly appreciated!
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Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from jake cosmos aller
I can sympathize with your point of view although I am more of a Buddhist than anything else and don't believe that there is a personal creator God, i see the whole universe as being alive in a sense.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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I can sympathize with your point of view although I am more of a Buddhist than anything else and don't believe that there is a personal creator God, i see the whole universe as being alive in a sense.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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Jake, I thank you very much for your honest, but kind review of mu poem. I respect our differences regarding faith & never try to push my beliefs on others.
However, I am destined to write about what I love! I look forward to our paths crossing again soon!
Comment from Aubree Lorraine
Even though I'm not yet ready to think about fall, this is a wonderful poem. Well written, good cadence and time scheme. Excellent job. Best wishes to you!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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Even though I'm not yet ready to think about fall, this is a wonderful poem. Well written, good cadence and time scheme. Excellent job. Best wishes to you!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your kind review of my poem. It is truly appreciated!
Btw: your name is as beautiful as your picture!
Comment from Anne Johnston
You have captured an exquisite picture of the sunset and written beautiful words to describe it. Our Lord has given us so many beautiful things to enjoy, and the ability to appreciate them.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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You have captured an exquisite picture of the sunset and written beautiful words to describe it. Our Lord has given us so many beautiful things to enjoy, and the ability to appreciate them.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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Thank you Anne, for your kind review of my poem. It is truly appreciated!
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You are welcome
