Forever After
A dangerous question52 total reviews
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow writer a good day to you. I hope this review finds you well. As a poet/writer it is always interesting to see the different takes on these contest/writing prompts. I think your take is definitely a good one, though not much of a choice for Earl. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Hello fellow writer a good day to you. I hope this review finds you well. As a poet/writer it is always interesting to see the different takes on these contest/writing prompts. I think your take is definitely a good one, though not much of a choice for Earl. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Thank you. I think it would not be a very good question to ask a spouse. Lol. Hugs.
Comment from Malcolm Rothery
Clever to get this story finished in just 50 words, well done. You could also enter it into a dialogue only contest.
I'm sure this is a conversation that many of us have had - though maybe not with this cute answer.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Clever to get this story finished in just 50 words, well done. You could also enter it into a dialogue only contest.
I'm sure this is a conversation that many of us have had - though maybe not with this cute answer.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Thank you for reading and commenting. Hugs
Comment from tfawcus
That sounds like a lady who knows how to handle her bloke. The angry ghost of my wife would sure put me off marrying again! A well-written anecdote. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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That sounds like a lady who knows how to handle her bloke. The angry ghost of my wife would sure put me off marrying again! A well-written anecdote. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Thank you for reading and commenting. Hugs.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Haha, I can just hear Mabel speaking these words,
Mystery Author. Your did a great job with your
contest entry. You told a great little story in the space
allowed. Love the picture.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Haha, I can just hear Mabel speaking these words,
Mystery Author. Your did a great job with your
contest entry. You told a great little story in the space
allowed. Love the picture.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 07-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Thank you for reading and commenting. Hugs
Comment from Wendy G
Lol. Very humorous - and also well written. Complete within itself, yet it speaks of love and relationships. I enjoyed reading this one. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Lol. Very humorous - and also well written. Complete within itself, yet it speaks of love and relationships. I enjoyed reading this one. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 07-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Thank you for reading and commenting. Hugs.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
I like the picture of tow lovely cats. They are lovely and show the affections.
This piece is good for the contest.
The conversations are amazing. Good luck to your contest.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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I like the picture of tow lovely cats. They are lovely and show the affections.
This piece is good for the contest.
The conversations are amazing. Good luck to your contest.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Thank you for reading and commenting. It means a lot to me. Hugs
Comment from Pearl Edwards
My granddaughter has already told her husband to be that she has to be the one to go first, and as in your final sentence, ditto. A fun read and a cute cat picture. Good luck in the contest. Cheers
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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My granddaughter has already told her husband to be that she has to be the one to go first, and as in your final sentence, ditto. A fun read and a cute cat picture. Good luck in the contest. Cheers
Comment Written 07-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I appreciate it. Hugs.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
Love this wee story. It is very challenging to tell a complete story using 50 words, you did a nice job. I appreciate the whimsy. I smiles at the end.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
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Love this wee story. It is very challenging to tell a complete story using 50 words, you did a nice job. I appreciate the whimsy. I smiles at the end.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
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Thank you. It was just a short fun write. Hugs.
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is super cute and funny. I would say you didn't leave him much say in the matter, lol. Thanks for sharing. I wish you much success with the contest
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
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This is super cute and funny. I would say you didn't leave him much say in the matter, lol. Thanks for sharing. I wish you much success with the contest
Comment Written 07-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
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Thank you. It is hard to tell a story with fifty words but I can imagine a conversation like this one. Hugs.
Comment from BethShelby
This is a very cute flash. Most human couples having such a discussion might say, I just want you to be happy, but I'm not sure in their mind that they might be thinking a lot like Mabel.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
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This is a very cute flash. Most human couples having such a discussion might say, I just want you to be happy, but I'm not sure in their mind that they might be thinking a lot like Mabel.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2022
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Thank you. I heard my sister-in-law say something similiar to my brother. She was always a clown. Hugs.
