God Called
God came to recover his soul31 total reviews
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Willie, your story-in-a-poem is filled with vivid imagery. I could see the whole scene from old the old coot mending his own socks, to the note left on the door, to his tombstone. This ol' guy is finally resting in peace.
Your poem also illustrates the devastation and self-destruction of loneliness. Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
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Hi Willie, your story-in-a-poem is filled with vivid imagery. I could see the whole scene from old the old coot mending his own socks, to the note left on the door, to his tombstone. This ol' guy is finally resting in peace.
Your poem also illustrates the devastation and self-destruction of loneliness. Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
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Comment Written 29-Oct-2022
