The Divine Nonsense of Jim Wile
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Comment from JT traveller
Ah, so now we know. We can blame Pluto, for global warming, the Earth's axial tilt and subsequent increased tectonic activity. This is a great two part poem. I am so glad that you continued it. So much fun!
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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023
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Ah, so now we know. We can blame Pluto, for global warming, the Earth's axial tilt and subsequent increased tectonic activity. This is a great two part poem. I am so glad that you continued it. So much fun!
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Comment Written 09-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023
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Yes, quite an impact he made on Earth! Thanks for the great review, Jacqueline.
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😂 you are on a roll. Your poem, how did you plan-et?
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Good one! I had to decide whether to write the entire thing and post it, or-bit by bit. I thought I'd better hook readers first with a shorter poem so it wouldn't be so painful to read a really long poem until I captured their interest.
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I hear you. Always a difficult decision. While we want feedback we also do not want people bypassing our work because it is too long. Good judgement Jim.
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Very funny take on a serious astronomy subject. You seem very vesed in that domain actually, and it's a rarity to find such enjoyable literature about such scientific facts. I really enjoyed the unique approach. You might think about making an illustrated book on that.
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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023
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Very funny take on a serious astronomy subject. You seem very vesed in that domain actually, and it's a rarity to find such enjoyable literature about such scientific facts. I really enjoyed the unique approach. You might think about making an illustrated book on that.
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Comment Written 09-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023
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Thank you for your very kind review, Mario. After I wrote the poem, my wife and I really enjoyed psychoanalyzing Pluto and coming up with theories about his behavior. Good fun.