Apple Pie Hill
This is a rhymed poem.40 total reviews
Comment from fm wright
Not only did I get a wonderful visual while reading this beautifully worded poem, I felt an energy while reading it. A great entry for the rhyming word contest.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Not only did I get a wonderful visual while reading this beautifully worded poem, I felt an energy while reading it. A great entry for the rhyming word contest.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Hello Faye. Thank you for the marvelous review and rating for my poem, Apple Pie Hill. I?m glad you enjoyed the sensory imagery and felt an energy while reading the poem.
I appreciated the encouraging comments and six stars very much.
Best wishes.
Robert
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You are very much welcome. Best wishes with it in the contest.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
It's good to see you posting again. As always your poetry is top-notch and delivers the best of what FS has to offer. Your notes are extensive and I was astonished to read of the quake in New Jersey, did you feel it?
This speaks of the pine hills and their diverse abundance of species of animals and plants.
Thanks for addressing the need to preserve our nation's waterways.
Jesse
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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It's good to see you posting again. As always your poetry is top-notch and delivers the best of what FS has to offer. Your notes are extensive and I was astonished to read of the quake in New Jersey, did you feel it?
This speaks of the pine hills and their diverse abundance of species of animals and plants.
Thanks for addressing the need to preserve our nation's waterways.
Jesse
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Hello Jesse. Thank you for the marvelous review and rating for my poem, Apple Pie Hill. I?m glad you enjoyed the sensory imagery and the rhymes. I've hikes and canoed these trails and rivers for many decades, it is a unique area many are aware of.
Yes, we did feel the quake, though it was short and fortunately did no damage. We had one some years ago that lasted a little longer, but quakes are rare here. There are fault lines all around the country, this one was centered about a hundred mile northwest.
I appreciated the encouraging comments and six stars very much.
Best wishes, my friend.
Robert
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Hello Robert.
Hiking and canoeing the Apple Pie Hill sounds like wonderful fun and excitement.
I still remember the big quake two years ago on December 21st. It traumatized both me and my cat Sunny. Since then, I have kept lanterns nearby, and flashlights, so I can see, when, and if, the power goes out.
Have a lovely upcoming week.
Your friend,
Jesse
Comment from Mrs. KT
Good morning, Robert!
Perfection in form, images, tone, and message.
How your poetic offering resonates deeply with me.
Sounds like a trek to my beloved "Miller's Pond."
We all need an "Apple Pie Hill" in our lives... now more than ever...
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Good morning, Robert!
Perfection in form, images, tone, and message.
How your poetic offering resonates deeply with me.
Sounds like a trek to my beloved "Miller's Pond."
We all need an "Apple Pie Hill" in our lives... now more than ever...
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Hello Diane. Thank you for the marvelous review and rating for my poem, Apple Pie Hill. I?m glad you enjoyed the sensory imagery and the rhymes. I though you might see a comparison to Miller's Pond. :)
I appreciated the encouraging comments and six stars very much.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment from GoWiSt
Good use of similes and sensory imagery.
Good rhymes and syllabic reading flow.
Your words put me in the scene, and I like what I see in my mind's eye.
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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Good use of similes and sensory imagery.
Good rhymes and syllabic reading flow.
Your words put me in the scene, and I like what I see in my mind's eye.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Hello GoWiSt. Thank you for the excellent review and rating for my poem, Apple Pie Hill. I?m glad you enjoyed the sensory imagery, the rhymes and the flow.
I appreciated the encouraging comments and stars very much.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice images and presentation, Robert.
-Your notes are very much appreciated, and I learned a lot.
-You do a great job sharing the diversity in this special place.
-Many good images and rhyme create a smooth flow
and tell a good story.
-Your opening paragraph invites us to go on this journey with you.
-I think many pies have been made from the berries.
-I like this image:
"You'll get the odd feeling that you're not alone;
The wind in the bush has a whispery tone."
-You create a peaceful mood with the last two verses
and make us wish that we were going on this journey, too.
-An excellent poem; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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-Very nice images and presentation, Robert.
-Your notes are very much appreciated, and I learned a lot.
-You do a great job sharing the diversity in this special place.
-Many good images and rhyme create a smooth flow
and tell a good story.
-Your opening paragraph invites us to go on this journey with you.
-I think many pies have been made from the berries.
-I like this image:
"You'll get the odd feeling that you're not alone;
The wind in the bush has a whispery tone."
-You create a peaceful mood with the last two verses
and make us wish that we were going on this journey, too.
-An excellent poem; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Hello Pam. Thank you for the marvelous, detailed review and rating for my poem, Apple Pie Hill. I?m glad you enjoyed the descriptive imagery and the rhymes. Thank for noting your favorite lines too, it's always good to know what resonates with readers.
I appreciated the encouraging comments and the generous stars very much.
Best wishes.
Robert
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You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and review, Robert. It is an excellent poem. I also appreciate your reply.
Comment from zanya
Wow - a poem lauding Nature and her many wonders in this special place- while engaging many of the senses - it's a veritable gem - and the use of language and imagery is a poetic treat.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Wow - a poem lauding Nature and her many wonders in this special place- while engaging many of the senses - it's a veritable gem - and the use of language and imagery is a poetic treat.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Hello Zanya. Thank you for the wonderful review and rating for my poem, Apple Pie Hill. I?m glad you enjoyed the sensory imagery and the rhymes. I've hiked the trails many times.
I appreciated the encouraging comments and six stars very much.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Stunning poem, Robert, and the vivid imagery in your words make me wish I could go there. I'm glad it is now protected, it would be a shame to lose all that beauty. The picture is lovely, and I could just see the deer you mentioned in the shrub. Every stanza you've written here gives us a fabulous insight to another incredible scene, the rivers, the faunae of this particular area, it all sound fabulous. I really enjoyed every word of your poem, and if it was possible, I'd give you another six for the informative author's notes. Well done, my friend. Warmest hugs, Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Stunning poem, Robert, and the vivid imagery in your words make me wish I could go there. I'm glad it is now protected, it would be a shame to lose all that beauty. The picture is lovely, and I could just see the deer you mentioned in the shrub. Every stanza you've written here gives us a fabulous insight to another incredible scene, the rivers, the faunae of this particular area, it all sound fabulous. I really enjoyed every word of your poem, and if it was possible, I'd give you another six for the informative author's notes. Well done, my friend. Warmest hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Hello Sandra.Thank you for the marvelous, detailed review and rating for my poem, Apple Pie Hill. I?m glad you enjoyed the descriptive imagery. I've hiked these trails and canoed on the rivers for many decades. I also love to explore old ruins, like Harrisville and several others I didn't mention. There're like little time machines.
I appreciated the encouraging comments and constellation of stars very much.
Best wishes, my friend.
Robert
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This is a lovely poem, and I like the research you shared with us. Quite a few folk here like to research things and write about them. I really enjoy well done research. Karen
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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This is a lovely poem, and I like the research you shared with us. Quite a few folk here like to research things and write about them. I really enjoy well done research. Karen
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Hello Karen. Thank you for the marvelous review and rating for my poem, Apple Pie Hill. I?m glad you enjoyed the descriptive imagery and the rhymes. I've hiked these sandy trails for may decades.
I appreciated the encouraging comments and six stars very much.
Best wishes.
Robert
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You do nostalgia very well. One of my first stories "Genoa, Texas might interest you. Karen
Comment from Sallyo
I loved this one... so many reasons to go to Apple Pie Hill. My "local" is Dooleys Hill which also abounds in marvels. The length of this poem allows you to pile wonder upon wonder. My favourite stanza is number 6. That's when I really sat up...and the rest of the poem stands up to it.
Just one thing... red-pedaled Goat's Rue and ... should this be "petalled (or petaled")? Or are you using a term I just don't know?
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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I loved this one... so many reasons to go to Apple Pie Hill. My "local" is Dooleys Hill which also abounds in marvels. The length of this poem allows you to pile wonder upon wonder. My favourite stanza is number 6. That's when I really sat up...and the rest of the poem stands up to it.
Just one thing... red-pedaled Goat's Rue and ... should this be "petalled (or petaled")? Or are you using a term I just don't know?
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Hello Sally. Thank you for the wonderful review and rating for my poem, Apple Pie Hill. I?m glad you enjoyed the descriptive imagery and the rhymes. Dooley's Hill sounds like a marvelous place.
Thanks for noting the typo on "red-pedaled". For some reason Word doesn't like the correct spelling. The "d" should be a "t".
I appreciated the encouraging comments and six stars very much.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It sounds like there is a lot to see here, full of activity in this wood of wildlife, flowers and trees, I enjoyed this entertaining poem and would like to visit Apple Pie Hill and see it all first hand, but for now I am seeing this little world through your eyes, a well rhymed and metered post, love Dolly x x. x
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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It sounds like there is a lot to see here, full of activity in this wood of wildlife, flowers and trees, I enjoyed this entertaining poem and would like to visit Apple Pie Hill and see it all first hand, but for now I am seeing this little world through your eyes, a well rhymed and metered post, love Dolly x x. x
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Hello Dolly. Thank you for the marvelous review and rating for my poem, Apple Pie Hill. I?m glad you enjoyed the descriptive imagery and the rhymes. I've hiked the sandy trails many times over the years.
I appreciated the encouraging comments and six stars very much.
Best wishes.
Robert
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You are most welcome Robert, this is a magical post x
