Say You Are Sorry Later
Jealousy at its worst51 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This was a well-written poem in the Romance poetry category. It has a good flow to it. I did see one typo that you will want to address. It is in the second to the last line, the word figure is misspelled. I enjoyed your work. Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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This was a well-written poem in the Romance poetry category. It has a good flow to it. I did see one typo that you will want to address. It is in the second to the last line, the word figure is misspelled. I enjoyed your work. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Thank you for everything.
Comment from Daylily
This is a very strong posting concerning one of the negatives traits of humanity--how easy it is to jump to the wrong conclusions, plus how willing a person can be to do it.
Trust is a crucial element of a good relationship. When it is not there, that relationship is already on rocky ground.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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This is a very strong posting concerning one of the negatives traits of humanity--how easy it is to jump to the wrong conclusions, plus how willing a person can be to do it.
Trust is a crucial element of a good relationship. When it is not there, that relationship is already on rocky ground.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Thank you. So far no one has chimed in on the part that mentioned the contribution of the friends opinions.
Comment from lancellot
A very well-crafted poem. And yes, your quite right, it is not wise to jump to conclusions, but as we all know, people are seldom wise or logical, when strong emotions are at play. Love is very powerful, so is self-doubt. Combine with them both with a ounce of jealousy and you have a recipe for disaster.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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A very well-crafted poem. And yes, your quite right, it is not wise to jump to conclusions, but as we all know, people are seldom wise or logical, when strong emotions are at play. Love is very powerful, so is self-doubt. Combine with them both with a ounce of jealousy and you have a recipe for disaster.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your comments. Not to be discounted is the comments made by the friends.
Comment from Gunner Lil
I enjoyed reading this poem.
It is a very easy read. The rhyming is also good.
This poem has very good flow and an excellent pace.
Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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I enjoyed reading this poem.
It is a very easy read. The rhyming is also good.
This poem has very good flow and an excellent pace.
Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I absolutely agree with what you say, Nomi. So many couples have gone through the pain of a divorce when all that was needed was trust, and a chat. Your poem is well written, my friend, and tells the story so many people can relate to. So sad. I'm sorry I'm out of sixes, your poem truly deserved one. Warmest hugs, my friend. Sandra xx
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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I absolutely agree with what you say, Nomi. So many couples have gone through the pain of a divorce when all that was needed was trust, and a chat. Your poem is well written, my friend, and tells the story so many people can relate to. So sad. I'm sorry I'm out of sixes, your poem truly deserved one. Warmest hugs, my friend. Sandra xx
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your fine comments.
Comment from lyenochka
What a super message in your well crafted poem with the many regular internal rhyming. The message is true not only for relationships but for a certain party that was duped by the Russians to spread lies. But they will have to swim alligator-infested waters because they are never willing to apologize.
Great poem! And so melodic!
One small typo: than have to figuire out how (figure)
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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What a super message in your well crafted poem with the many regular internal rhyming. The message is true not only for relationships but for a certain party that was duped by the Russians to spread lies. But they will have to swim alligator-infested waters because they are never willing to apologize.
Great poem! And so melodic!
One small typo: than have to figuire out how (figure)
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your great comments. You are the second person to point out the typo. It was a recent insertion, I will fix it right away.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm sure at one time or another we have all jumped to conclusions. I know in my situation I would never give my husband the slightest inclination that he would ever have to worry about anything. Being a military spouse and through numerous deployments, I never wanted him to even entertain the idea. Your poem rings true for so many. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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I'm sure at one time or another we have all jumped to conclusions. I know in my situation I would never give my husband the slightest inclination that he would ever have to worry about anything. Being a military spouse and through numerous deployments, I never wanted him to even entertain the idea. Your poem rings true for so many. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful and supportive comments. I adore and admire you, but I would never step over the line and say anything ever that could be considered inappropriate. I have far too much respect for you, my wife and myself to ever do such a thing.
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AMEN!!!!
Comment from estory
Like the hip hop rhythm, and the sharp images of misunderstandings. There is a lesson to be learned here; don't jump to conclusions without learning the full story. But here you lay out all the falling dominos that can result from a hasty judgement of an isolated incident. estory
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Like the hip hop rhythm, and the sharp images of misunderstandings. There is a lesson to be learned here; don't jump to conclusions without learning the full story. But here you lay out all the falling dominos that can result from a hasty judgement of an isolated incident. estory
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Thank you, I appreciate your awesome comments.
Comment from Raul1
I think that all of us are sorry for some things we have done in the past. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. Excellent work! Nice. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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I think that all of us are sorry for some things we have done in the past. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. Excellent work! Nice. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Thank you sir. I appreciate your fine comments.
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Now what kind of a mess did you get yourself into, bro?? LOL, I pray this was fiction or I am teasing you and you might hate me for it. OUCH!! That would hurt a lot. .... I like your poem and it makes a lot of sense tho just because we all jump to conclusions at some point, and doesn't mean we are doing something wrong. So even tho it is probably all fictional, let's pretend that it was true. .... Of course I should let you know that it is hereditary for us to flirt a little. I have gotten myself into a few fixes by being too friendly. And I know you well enough to know you are pretty irresistible for the ladies. So yes, she should apologize if she took it wrong. However, she should have known she married a guy with lots of charisma and charm! (Big Smile and Hugs!)
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Now what kind of a mess did you get yourself into, bro?? LOL, I pray this was fiction or I am teasing you and you might hate me for it. OUCH!! That would hurt a lot. .... I like your poem and it makes a lot of sense tho just because we all jump to conclusions at some point, and doesn't mean we are doing something wrong. So even tho it is probably all fictional, let's pretend that it was true. .... Of course I should let you know that it is hereditary for us to flirt a little. I have gotten myself into a few fixes by being too friendly. And I know you well enough to know you are pretty irresistible for the ladies. So yes, she should apologize if she took it wrong. However, she should have known she married a guy with lots of charisma and charm! (Big Smile and Hugs!)
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much. I should have stated that it was purely fictional. I am blushing to the max. Even though only I am aware.