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Comment from John Ciarmello
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Debi, this is a beautiful tribute to Him, and I appreciate all the religious folks on this site as I learn more about Him daily. I have always tried to respect what he stands for and died for. I cherish the cross and its symbolism, but I still work on my faith. I pray I will get it all right someday. :)

This is beautiful! Best, JohnC

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Hi John, no matter what your views are, you are always so respectful and I always appreciate it.

    I thank you for this lovely review of my early Easter poem, as I didn't want to post it so close to April Fool's day.

    I just felt the need to write about Jesus and remind people of His love for us.
    Thanks for your kind words for this poem, dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Sally Law
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This is spectacular, my friend! Oh, how the dark world needs the light and salvation our Lord and Savior today! Beautifully crafted and illustrated and with the Easter Hallelujah! I'm rejoicing in my salvation today. It was September 10, 1971. Yes, the day I heard the gospel of Christ and received it all by faith. I was water baptized the following Sunday.

Thank you for sharing! I pray many on FanStory are touched by the Holy Spirit today.

Sending you my very best today as always, and blessings abundant in our Lord Jesus Christ.
Love,
Sal XOs!

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Thanks Ms Sally Marie, I thank you for this lovely review of my early Easter poem, as I didn't want to post it so close to April Fool's day.

    I just felt the need to write about Jesus and remind people of His love for us.
    Thanks for your kind words for this poem, dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from royowen
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But if you made Jesus your choice, the statement, is the definite sign of gain or loss, I believe that everyone gets a chance, so we can never blame God, for giving us that chance, giving His only Son in our place. But still He desires none should perish, well done, great post, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Thanks Roy, and we have made the best choice, haven't we??

    I thank you for this lovely review of my early Easter poem, as I didn't want to post it so close to April Fool's day.

    I just felt the need to write about Jesus and remind people of His love for us.
    Thanks for your kind words for this poem, dear friend. Love, Debi
reply by royowen on 17-Mar-2024
    Thanks Debi
Comment from Wendy G
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A beautiful poem! You have clearly expressed the birth, life, ministry, and death and resurrection of Jesus our Lord. I like the choice of rhyming pattern too. It is timely for Easter, and a great prompt for meditation. Thanks for sharing.
Wendy

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 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Hi Wendy, and as always you are so very kind. I don't think there is any bad time to do a poem about Jesus, except maybe April Fools, so I thought I would do my little simple poem a little early, since they are only a day apart.

    Thanks again, my dear friend for the very kind review and words.
    Love, Debi
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Just as his initial appearance was foretold, his return is also down in writing. Not everyone will be happy to learn of his return. Why? Because his return will bring about the destruction of all the fake Christians who do nothing but violate all that he stands for and some will have the nerve to claim that they did good things in his name.

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 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Hey, Nomi and as always you are so very kind. I don't think there is any bad time to do a poem about Jesus, except maybe April Fools, so I thought I would do my little simple poem a little early, since they are only a day apart.

    Thanks again, my dear BBB for the very kind review and words.
    Love, Debi
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Debi, you brought me to tears. This poem is one of the best I've ever read on the life, death and resurrection of Jesus. You were to the point and said it all.

I cried all the way through the video. I have never seen it before. Thank you, thank you, thank you for sharing the poem and the song.

God bless,
I love you,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Oh thank you Rhonda, and as always you are so very kind. I don't think there is any bad time to do a poem about Jesus, except maybe April Fools, so I thought I would do my little simple poem a little early, since they are only a day apart.

    Thanks again, my dear friend for the very kind review and words, and the very generous six stars too. I appreciate it so very much.
    Love, Debi
Comment from jmdg1954
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What a wonderful poem. A brief life's story of the One we should cherish, obey, love and listen to. For He knows us and our destiny.

Debi, in g th his Easter season you've given us words to think about and we should adhere to.

Let me be the first to say thank you for sharing this with us. The photo mirrors your writing perfectly.
Enjoy your Sunday.

John

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Hi John, lately when I look for spiritual here, I am not sure what I am going to find, so I thought I would write some for myself. Haha!
    And as always, dear one, you are so very kind. I don't think there is any bad time to do a poem about Jesus, except maybe April Fools, so I thought I would do my little simple poem a little early, since they are only a day apart.

    Thanks again, my dear friend for the very kind review and words and your very gracious six stars, my very dear friend and bro.
    Love, Debi