Saying Good-Bye
Will I know love again?38 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
Well, I, for one, hope this love re-appears. I found mine, married her, and divorced her thirteen months later. That was in the early ninety's. I never dated again.
God bless,
Steve
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Well, I, for one, hope this love re-appears. I found mine, married her, and divorced her thirteen months later. That was in the early ninety's. I never dated again.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 29-Jun-2024
Comment from Boogienights
This is a truly beautiful poem about loss love and regret. Sometimes people experience such h deep emotions, it's hard to let go. Your poem will resonate with a lot of people. Thanks for sharing.
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This is a truly beautiful poem about loss love and regret. Sometimes people experience such h deep emotions, it's hard to let go. Your poem will resonate with a lot of people. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2024
Comment from Ulla
Oh Jim, what a bittersweet poem. This is so beautifully written and accompanied with one of my favourite songs. She was there and then she was gone. How sad. Now all he has are memories. Ulla:)))
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Oh Jim, what a bittersweet poem. This is so beautifully written and accompanied with one of my favourite songs. She was there and then she was gone. How sad. Now all he has are memories. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 29-Jun-2024
Comment from Sarah Probe 1
Lovely love poem, maybe that, in this described situation, it wasn't meant to be, and that destiny had wanted things to be otherwise, then after the storm, there's always a rainbow, she'll be back ? or someone more loving will replace her ? .... excellent poetry, very romantic and inspiring,
Best wishes,
Sarah
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Lovely love poem, maybe that, in this described situation, it wasn't meant to be, and that destiny had wanted things to be otherwise, then after the storm, there's always a rainbow, she'll be back ? or someone more loving will replace her ? .... excellent poetry, very romantic and inspiring,
Best wishes,
Sarah
Comment Written 29-Jun-2024
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
A bittersweet poem of love shared for a season, then lost. Hoping for another season, your heart dreams on. One always has to dream. She may have gotten with another, but, perhaps, the memory of you will haunt her as well.
Big hugs,
Rhonda
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A bittersweet poem of love shared for a season, then lost. Hoping for another season, your heart dreams on. One always has to dream. She may have gotten with another, but, perhaps, the memory of you will haunt her as well.
Big hugs,
Rhonda
Comment Written 29-Jun-2024
Comment from patcelaw
This is a lovely poem and I enjoyed very much listening to it it flows very well when it is read aloud your presentation is beautiful and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia
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This is a lovely poem and I enjoyed very much listening to it it flows very well when it is read aloud your presentation is beautiful and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia
Comment Written 29-Jun-2024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this beautifully written poem of a lost love. I could feel the emotion. That's a good thing. I also want to thank you for sharing the song, 'Sealed with a Kiss'. I'd forgotten about this song, but as soon a as I saw the title, the words came to me. I sang along with the song. Thank you for taking me back to my teenage years.
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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Thank you for sharing this beautifully written poem of a lost love. I could feel the emotion. That's a good thing. I also want to thank you for sharing the song, 'Sealed with a Kiss'. I'd forgotten about this song, but as soon a as I saw the title, the words came to me. I sang along with the song. Thank you for taking me back to my teenage years.
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Comment Written 29-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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What?? I only took you back three years?
Only kidding. Thanks for the nice words!
Comment from GoWiSt
"Will I know love again?" Depends on how it looks next time you see it.
" spring, the autumn of my life" Good use of oxymoron.
"till the spring flowers crumbled" Oh, such sad imagery.
"and the lips I long to taste
now belong to another" Facial lip transplant?
"I'm a fool to think she'll remember" Well, no one knows you better.
If not 'her' I hope the speaker finds love again.
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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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"Will I know love again?" Depends on how it looks next time you see it.
" spring, the autumn of my life" Good use of oxymoron.
"till the spring flowers crumbled" Oh, such sad imagery.
"and the lips I long to taste
now belong to another" Facial lip transplant?
"I'm a fool to think she'll remember" Well, no one knows you better.
If not 'her' I hope the speaker finds love again.
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Comment Written 29-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Thank you. I always enjoy your reviews!
