The Right Place
For those times when the world can get to you38 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
This is an absolutely beautifully written poem that you have shared with us today and I very much enjoyed it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Your presentation is absolutely lovely. May you have a wonderful weekend. And a good holiday. Patricia.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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This is an absolutely beautifully written poem that you have shared with us today and I very much enjoyed it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Your presentation is absolutely lovely. May you have a wonderful weekend. And a good holiday. Patricia.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much, Pat for the very kind review and comments for my poem. You are always so sweet and a little extra sweetness sure goes a long ways. Thank you for that, my dear friend. Thank you too for your generous six stars. I appreciate you so much. Love, Debi
Comment from karenina
How perfectly said, Debi! We can be so downtrodden by the things we deal with in life. I don't know a soul who doesn't feel hurt, doubt, or injured. There is a place where we all know we are unconditionally loved.
We'll feel discouraged if we look for it this side of heaven, although we have many angels among us. You gently remind us that we should rest awhile and let the sadness flow away. Heaven knows there is true happiness for all who believe!
Karenina
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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How perfectly said, Debi! We can be so downtrodden by the things we deal with in life. I don't know a soul who doesn't feel hurt, doubt, or injured. There is a place where we all know we are unconditionally loved.
We'll feel discouraged if we look for it this side of heaven, although we have many angels among us. You gently remind us that we should rest awhile and let the sadness flow away. Heaven knows there is true happiness for all who believe!
Karenina
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thank you so very much, Karenina. You are right, and with the help of some heavenly angels and some wonderful earth angels we get through these rough times. Somehow it seems being human can still make us go to those unwanted places.
Thanks for all the kind and encouraging words. You cannot know what they mean to me. So very much appreciated. And thanks so much for the booster of the six stars, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
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Thank you so very much, Karenina. You are right, and with the help of some heavenly angels and some wonderful earth angels we get through these rough times. Somehow it seems being human can still make us go to those unwanted places.
Thanks for all the kind and encouraging words. You cannot know what they mean to me. So very much appreciated. And thanks so much for the booster of the six stars, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
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Stay in the light...the dark shadows don't have a chance!
Comment from Dr. Nad
Hey Debi, you are a true advocate. There are those that go and stand on street corners with signs, others make speeches in front of crowds but you are one that takes your God-given ability to masterfully craft your extensive verbal skills into rhyming poems that have lasting impact. Your advocacy incorporates people, projects, and principles for what you stand. I'm not always so bold, that's why we need people like you to put into words the things that we know are true and lack the ability to articulate! Thanks sis.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Hey Debi, you are a true advocate. There are those that go and stand on street corners with signs, others make speeches in front of crowds but you are one that takes your God-given ability to masterfully craft your extensive verbal skills into rhyming poems that have lasting impact. Your advocacy incorporates people, projects, and principles for what you stand. I'm not always so bold, that's why we need people like you to put into words the things that we know are true and lack the ability to articulate! Thanks sis.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much, Dan, for the very kind review and comments for my poem. You are always so kind and a little extra kindness sure goes a long ways. Thank you for that, my dear friend. Thank you too for your generous six stars. I appreciate you so much. Love, Debi
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You are most welcome, sis.
Comment from lyenochka
Virtual six! Loved your thoughtful poem. We all have those unpleasant places where we were wounded and the evil one brings them up to cause us grief. But we know the Jesus gave us the victory over every place.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Virtual six! Loved your thoughtful poem. We all have those unpleasant places where we were wounded and the evil one brings them up to cause us grief. But we know the Jesus gave us the victory over every place.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much, Helen, for the very kind review and comments for my poem. You are always so wonderfully sweet, and a little extra sweetness sure goes a long ways. Thank you for that, my dear friend and sis.
I appreciate you so much. Love, Debi
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
oh someone had a flash of inspiration! Beautifully written and there is that lovely flow that I love reading. it's nice to have that destination on our bucket list, isn't it? Great job. thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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oh someone had a flash of inspiration! Beautifully written and there is that lovely flow that I love reading. it's nice to have that destination on our bucket list, isn't it? Great job. thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much, Marilyn, for the very kind review and comments for my poem. You are always so sweet and I thank you for that, my dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Nicki.B
I love the imagery you have used for the poem, the heart with the flowing of beautiful colours, it represents your poem how the poem flows through your feelings of hurt from the past through to the positivity of wanting to put it behind you. Best wishes to you, it can be hard to put these aside for good.
We all
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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I love the imagery you have used for the poem, the heart with the flowing of beautiful colours, it represents your poem how the poem flows through your feelings of hurt from the past through to the positivity of wanting to put it behind you. Best wishes to you, it can be hard to put these aside for good.
We all
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much, Nicki, for the very kind review and comments for my poem. You are always so kind and a little extra kindness sure goes a long ways. Thank you for that, my dear friend. I appreciate you so much. Love, Debi
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You're very welcome Debi, it costs nothing to be kind does it. I see that the end of my text got cut off, to finish I was saying we all have some demons but we must try and put them to bed, you cannot change the past but we can cope and learn to love with better and live in the present and do our best!
Comment from royowen
The shame we feel and that makes us cringe is from the past, because God tells us psalm 103 that as far as the east is from the west he has remove our sin and will not remember it again, only good things, but our memory that smouldering remembers bad things, enjoy the moment, that's really the only time we've got, this is a wonderful reminder in God's we have no sinful past, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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The shame we feel and that makes us cringe is from the past, because God tells us psalm 103 that as far as the east is from the west he has remove our sin and will not remember it again, only good things, but our memory that smouldering remembers bad things, enjoy the moment, that's really the only time we've got, this is a wonderful reminder in God's we have no sinful past, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much, Roy, for the very kind review and comments for my poem. You are always so wise and a little extra wisdom sure goes a long ways. Thank you for that, my dear friend. I appreciate you so much.
Love, Debi
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, often the pain of previous years does come back to haunt us. I have often wondered why, especially when I've been sure I've handled it. I do believe it comes back for a reason. Probably another lesson I need to be taught. DANG!!!!! Thank you for sharing this beautifully written poem with us.
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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Yes, often the pain of previous years does come back to haunt us. I have often wondered why, especially when I've been sure I've handled it. I do believe it comes back for a reason. Probably another lesson I need to be taught. DANG!!!!! Thank you for sharing this beautifully written poem with us.
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Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much, Barb, for the very kind review and comments for my poem. You are always so sweet and a little extra sweetness sure goes a long ways. Thank you for that, my dear friend. I appreciate you so much.
Love, Debi