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Reminiscing

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A collection of short stories

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Comment from Ric Myworld
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Oh, isn't that a sweet little story, and all children need a pet, and in my opinion, a dog is the best. But I have to agree they are a responsibility and they all poop. LOL. Plus, in our busy world, so many of them are left alone much of the time, which might be considered a little selfish. LOL. Don't get mad, I'm just picking at you. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
    Since both parents' work, the dog would be left alone a lot. They do have two cats. LOL Thank you for the understanding.
Comment from lyenochka
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Who is the granddaughter who wants to be a veterinarian?
I think Eleanor could be a lawyer!
And I'm guessing she and Charolette (what an unusual spelling!) will be getting a dog soon thanks to your help!
Enjoyed your story!

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
    Arianna is my granddaughter who wants to be the veterinarian. She's 20 years old. Andrew is pretty firm against it. LOL I haven't heard a comment from Katie yet. I was amazed at Eleanor's logic for as young as she is. Thank you for the kind review. I need to go back and correct the spelling. Oh dear.
reply by lyenochka on 31-Jul-2024
    Oh, is it supposed to be Charlotte? That's my oldest granddaughter's name.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
    I've made the correction. Thank you for pointing it out.
Comment from estory
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I thought it was a charming little post that illustrates a kid's view of the world. Grown ups have a different view, which comes through in the conversation of your son. Kids think of the cuddly dog, the play time. Grown ups think of cleaning up the dog poop. Somewhere in between, there is life. estory

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 Comment Written 31-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
    Thank you for the support. I appreciate it.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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"We don't remember days I remember moments" so true.

Eleanor sounds like an adorable little girl. All kids like animals but not everyone can get one. My grandson wants a dog but we live in a townhouse... similar to an apartment. We tell him we will get one when we move to a house.
Well done!

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novali



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 Comment Written 31-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
    Thank you for the support. I appreciate it.