Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I know that musty smell very well. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading. You did a great job with imagery. Good luck with the contest.

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 Comment Written 10-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024

Thanks sfor commenting on my short peom.
Beth