One Year to Gold
A Merry~go~Rhyme for Sally and Jack Law43 total reviews
Comment from jmdg1954
What a wonderful poem a-la merry-go-round you wrote for Sally and Jack.
One more to go for the gold... I hope it's filled with love, health, happiness and memories for them both.
I enjoyed your song selections.
Nicely penned , sis.
Cheers,
John
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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What a wonderful poem a-la merry-go-round you wrote for Sally and Jack.
One more to go for the gold... I hope it's filled with love, health, happiness and memories for them both.
I enjoyed your song selections.
Nicely penned , sis.
Cheers,
John
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Hey Bro, now I am working on your poem and will let you know if I have any questions. But I do have one request? Will you please send me some of your favorite music, please???
Thanks for your awesome review and you great comments. I do appreciate you so much little brother. Haha! Last day to say that! LOL.
Love, Debi.... many hugs too
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Me... anything Billy Joel, Doobie Brothers, Eagles, Elvis...
Stairway to Heaven, Aqualung, Free Bird, Roundabout by Yes a few of my favorite individual tunes.
You can see I'm all over the place.
I skipped college classes at Montclair State and waited in line to see Billy Joel in 1976 when he was a nobody...
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I loved him then, I love him still. I drove to Ames, I Iowa to see him and Elton John together in concert. I would go to the moon to see it again, it was so fantastic. I have been to four Billy Joel concerts altogether.
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I've seen him two times at MSG. He's playing next August at Giants stadium with Stevie Nicks. The tickets are soooo expensive.
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Oh John, if I could I would go with you to it. I love e Stevie Nicks
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I don't care if the tickets are $200.
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Multiply that by 4 in order to get a decent seat, unfortunately..,
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HOLY SMOKERS!!
You weren't a kidding expensive!! I love BJ but not enough to pair close to a grand to see him one night, and that is what it would be by the time you ate or drank. Can you imagine what a beer would cost??
Comment from TPAC
I found this write creatively composed in its structuring, loving the writer usage of GOLD throughout this provocative poem. Sorry hearing about family loses: but glad the chain of new addition to your household. All views in my opinion.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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I found this write creatively composed in its structuring, loving the writer usage of GOLD throughout this provocative poem. Sorry hearing about family loses: but glad the chain of new addition to your household. All views in my opinion.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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TPAC, I cannot thank you enough for the sweetest review and kind words for our anniversary couple and their poem. Thank you also for the lovely six stars. All is so appreciated. Love, Debi
Comment from Katiemae1977
What an undertaking Debbi. Another fine tribute to a great friend. Looks likes they had their share of ups and downs and soon they'll be celebrating their 50th Anniversary. You got a lot of information in this epic poem and I'm sure Sally is thrilled.
Well done Debbi!
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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What an undertaking Debbi. Another fine tribute to a great friend. Looks likes they had their share of ups and downs and soon they'll be celebrating their 50th Anniversary. You got a lot of information in this epic poem and I'm sure Sally is thrilled.
Well done Debbi!
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Katie, I cannot thank you enough for the sweetest review and kind words for our anniversary couple and their poem. Thank you also for the lovely six stars. All is so appreciated. Love, Debi
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing Sally and Jack's anniversary with us. This poem is so special and only one more year to go before they hit 50?? WOW!! The music you provide is special itself. Thank you, our very own special angel. You're remarkable.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Thank you for sharing Sally and Jack's anniversary with us. This poem is so special and only one more year to go before they hit 50?? WOW!! The music you provide is special itself. Thank you, our very own special angel. You're remarkable.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Dearest Barb, I thank you so very much for the lovely as always review and kind words to go with it for our Sally and Jack and their poem. I appreciate it so very much, my dear friend. Lotsa love, Debi
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Debi,
Your awesome tribute to Sally and Jack beams with the love and devotion these two share for each other.
I like this merry-go-round poem -- it's beat and rhyme.
Sally is such a good person. She's been through so much and triumphed through it all and loves Jesus above all.
A lovely poem, Debi.
Hugs, friend,
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Debi,
Your awesome tribute to Sally and Jack beams with the love and devotion these two share for each other.
I like this merry-go-round poem -- it's beat and rhyme.
Sally is such a good person. She's been through so much and triumphed through it all and loves Jesus above all.
A lovely poem, Debi.
Hugs, friend,
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Thanks so very much, , for the kindest and such a special review for my MN story. I sure appreciate you and the sweet comments. I love it!
Sorry it is so late; this is what happens when she has too many in a row and many thank you's to do. I appreciate it very much. Love, Debi
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You're welcome, Debi.😊
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What a lovely gift to give to those two lovely people. There life together hasn't been without its sadness, grief and loss, but together and with God they have made it through. 49 years of a loving relationship is quite an acheivement, and you have honoured it in your own loving way, Dear Debi. This was a beautiful tribute to Sally and Jack. Well done, my sweet friend. Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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What a lovely gift to give to those two lovely people. There life together hasn't been without its sadness, grief and loss, but together and with God they have made it through. 49 years of a loving relationship is quite an acheivement, and you have honoured it in your own loving way, Dear Debi. This was a beautiful tribute to Sally and Jack. Well done, my sweet friend. Sandra xxx
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Thanks so very much, Sandra, for the kindest and such a special review for Sally and Jack's poem. I sure appreciate you and the sweet comments. I love it and love you!!
Sorry it is so late; this is what happens when she has too many in a row and many thank you's to do. I appreciate it very much. Love, Debi
Comment from patcelaw
Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful poem with us about Sally and Jack celebrating their 49th wedding anniversary. It has been my pleasure through the years to be able to read Sally's work and to understand the difficulty said she has with her vision. She has been an inspiration to me through the years as well. This is a wonderful day and I praise God for giving us a person like Sally and forgiving Sally such a nice man as Jack. Patricia.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful poem with us about Sally and Jack celebrating their 49th wedding anniversary. It has been my pleasure through the years to be able to read Sally's work and to understand the difficulty said she has with her vision. She has been an inspiration to me through the years as well. This is a wonderful day and I praise God for giving us a person like Sally and forgiving Sally such a nice man as Jack. Patricia.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Patricia, I thank you so very much for the lovely as always review and kind words to go with it for our Sally and Jack and their poem. I appreciate it so very much, my dear friend. Lotsa love, Debi
Comment from Begin Again
What a warm and stunning tribute to Sally and Jack. It's a rarity these days for couples to reach that Golden number. I read once... it's because they came from an era where you fixed things instead of throwing it away. Amen! I wish them the best as your beautiful poem has done.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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What a warm and stunning tribute to Sally and Jack. It's a rarity these days for couples to reach that Golden number. I read once... it's because they came from an era where you fixed things instead of throwing it away. Amen! I wish them the best as your beautiful poem has done.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Hi Carol, I thank you so very much for the lovely as always review and kind words to go with it for our Sally and Jack and their poem. I appreciate it so very much, my dear friend. Lotsa love, Debi
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
What a stunning verse, Debi, celebrating Sal and Jack's 49th wedding anniversary! A momentous occasion as this lovely, romantic couple start heading into their 50th year of marriage. Congratulations, Sal and Jack! I hope you have the most wonderful day! Well done, Debi, for your special and moving tribute. Love Debbie xx
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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What a stunning verse, Debi, celebrating Sal and Jack's 49th wedding anniversary! A momentous occasion as this lovely, romantic couple start heading into their 50th year of marriage. Congratulations, Sal and Jack! I hope you have the most wonderful day! Well done, Debi, for your special and moving tribute. Love Debbie xx
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Dearest Debbie, you are so very kind, as always. Thank you so very much for all the sweet comments for Sally and Jack and their poem. Love you much, sweet friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Debi,
What a great poem you wrote for Sally and Jack celebrating 49 years.
The pictures are a wonderful age progression of true love. You have given them something to cherish.
Jack and Sally Happy 49th Anniversary
Well done my friend.
Cecilia
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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Debi,
What a great poem you wrote for Sally and Jack celebrating 49 years.
The pictures are a wonderful age progression of true love. You have given them something to cherish.
Jack and Sally Happy 49th Anniversary
Well done my friend.
Cecilia
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Hi Cecilia, I thank you so very much for the lovely as always review and kind words to go with it for our Sally and Jack and their poem. I appreciate it so very much, my dear friend. Lotsa love, Debi
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You're welcome. My sweet friend