Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

This was quite romantic and felt like an old school poem by one of the masters. The rich descriptions and the evocative feeling rang through each line. It was romantic and Valentines was a perfect venue for it. Good luck in the contest. Gretchen

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025

Thank you very much 😊 have a wonderful weekend.

Gypsy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Klimt did some amazing paintings and your poem matches the passion he was trying to convey. I liked how you made Dawn blushing at the sight of the lovers. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025

Thank you very much, big sister.

Love

Marival

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

This is an amazing poem of love and desire, very rich and lyrical in imagery and sensuous in tone. Very well done for the Valentine contest and I am sure it will do well. Best wishes.
Wendy

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 Comment Written 31-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2025

Thank you very much 😊 have a wonderful weekend.

Gypsy

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

An excellent entry for the Valentine Love Poem contest. This is so erotic and romantic. It felt a little bit like invading your personal space.

and our initials are engraved

on willow skin

its leaves die of envy

How beautiful is this! Queen of Haiku and romance. that's you. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 31-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2025

Thank you, MariLyn. The Queen of haiku and romance... I like the sound of that LoL I hope I win, I can use the money. I am going to Disneyland on Tuesday 😊

Gypsy