Alone
Starting fresh again33 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this Flash Fiction contest entry with us. First, we were on high alert, then paused it with Misty, and then high alert again with the ending. I enjoyed reading and with you luck with the contest.
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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2025
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Thank you for sharing this Flash Fiction contest entry with us. First, we were on high alert, then paused it with Misty, and then high alert again with the ending. I enjoyed reading and with you luck with the contest.
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Comment Written 10-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2025
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Thanks Barbara...Did it come across and have you guessing whether the ending was going to be good or bad? I hoped it eased the tension and then when least expecting it bam!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
This is a fantastic story. It starts out with the tension building as soon as she gets out of bed. Then BAM somebody is smothering her with their hand. Wonderful.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2025
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Carol,
This is a fantastic story. It starts out with the tension building as soon as she gets out of bed. Then BAM somebody is smothering her with their hand. Wonderful.
Cecilia
Comment Written 10-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2025
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Did the fact that she discovered silly things and let her guard down make the ending any stronger? Or did you expect it to be bad? And another six..I am so spoiled!
Smiles, Carol
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No I didn't think it was going to end like that. It was a surprise ending. It was fabulous my friend.
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I'm losing it...This was suppose to be the ending....He smirked, “Leaving wasn’t part of our vows.” But once again when I transferred from Word, I left it behind and just before I posted I had to add eight words... Not remembering what I wrote. I'm going to be in the looney bin soon.
Smiles, Carol
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You are doing to much at once. It happens. You're not crazy.
Comment from patcelaw
You are so very creative with your storytelling and I enjoy reading your things very much. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also wish you a very wonderful week and may God bless you. Patricia.
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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2025
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You are so very creative with your storytelling and I enjoy reading your things very much. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also wish you a very wonderful week and may God bless you. Patricia.
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Comment Written 10-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2025
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Thank you so much, Patricia. I just needed something to slow me down for a minute and then back to the keyboard. Glad you enjoyed it. Have a great week yourself.
Smiles, Carol
