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Something to make you smile50 total reviews
Comment from LadyMary
Smile I did, and you deserve the six stars for the determination to write this acrostic. Wow! I was just about to shut down the computer when I decided to review a few more poems, but I'm calling it a night now, while I'm still smiling. Congratulations on a terrific piece. LadyMary
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Smile I did, and you deserve the six stars for the determination to write this acrostic. Wow! I was just about to shut down the computer when I decided to review a few more poems, but I'm calling it a night now, while I'm still smiling. Congratulations on a terrific piece. LadyMary
Comment Written 13-Jun-2009
Comment from DandWH
Very well done. What a huge undertaking and to keep the rhyming going the way you did. It certainly made me smile. Thanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest.
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Very well done. What a huge undertaking and to keep the rhyming going the way you did. It certainly made me smile. Thanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2009
Comment from Amicus
Bravo! You made it to the end and kept the rhymes and rhythm spot on in this amusing and very well done acrostic style poem. I loved the fact that I could sing it to the Dick Van Dyke song easily and that it flowed so smoothly while still staying thematically meaningful. I admire the skill you show here...you make what must have been a difficult task seem easy!
Great job.
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Bravo! You made it to the end and kept the rhymes and rhythm spot on in this amusing and very well done acrostic style poem. I loved the fact that I could sing it to the Dick Van Dyke song easily and that it flowed so smoothly while still staying thematically meaningful. I admire the skill you show here...you make what must have been a difficult task seem easy!
Great job.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2009
Comment from patwannabe
Helvi2, you tried. I must give you a five for this, because you did your best. It really was quite foolish, but I think it passed the test. You picked the very longest word, that you could hope to find. And put it altogether, in the recess of your mind. And then you passed it on to us, which really is quite funny, I hope you'll try to sell it, and make pots and pots of money. My rhyme is better than yours but have a good day/evening/whatever anyway :-) pat
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2009
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Helvi2, you tried. I must give you a five for this, because you did your best. It really was quite foolish, but I think it passed the test. You picked the very longest word, that you could hope to find. And put it altogether, in the recess of your mind. And then you passed it on to us, which really is quite funny, I hope you'll try to sell it, and make pots and pots of money. My rhyme is better than yours but have a good day/evening/whatever anyway :-) pat
Comment Written 12-Jun-2009
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2009
Thank you for the great review that you wrote out in rhyme. I'm so glad that you had fun and thank you for your time.Your review just made my day and I think it's neat.I enjoyed it very much and thought your words were sweet.
Thank you so much for your special review
Helvi :o)
Comment from frelanz
LOL...LOL...what a joy this was to read. PERFECT poem!!! Love it. Well written. The words flow perfect. Brought a smile to my face and a little giggle with it. Well done :-)
Dawn
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LOL...LOL...what a joy this was to read. PERFECT poem!!! Love it. Well written. The words flow perfect. Brought a smile to my face and a little giggle with it. Well done :-)
Dawn
Comment Written 12-Jun-2009
Comment from Kristia
Hi,
This was a huge, huge undertaking! Very entertaining and its flow is good. I commend you for taking that word on.....most of us wounldn't dream of it. Nice Job.
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Hi,
This was a huge, huge undertaking! Very entertaining and its flow is good. I commend you for taking that word on.....most of us wounldn't dream of it. Nice Job.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2009
Comment from Joan E.
You did it! This acrostic is amazing and entertaining and in rhyme with rhythm. I don't think I've ever read one so long. I guess you really needed a challenge. I roared over "poet days are dead" and thoroughly admired your "beggar's cup" metaphor. (Shouldn't it be "has led me to doom" in your "Iconic" line?) I'm not sure I could even spell the word you chose! Brilliantly conceived and executed.
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You did it! This acrostic is amazing and entertaining and in rhyme with rhythm. I don't think I've ever read one so long. I guess you really needed a challenge. I roared over "poet days are dead" and thoroughly admired your "beggar's cup" metaphor. (Shouldn't it be "has led me to doom" in your "Iconic" line?) I'm not sure I could even spell the word you chose! Brilliantly conceived and executed.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2009
Comment from Annelisa
I'm surprised that you survived this! It is a hoot and A total delight to read. Good luck with this very abitious entry for the contest! Annelisa
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I'm surprised that you survived this! It is a hoot and A total delight to read. Good luck with this very abitious entry for the contest! Annelisa
Comment Written 11-Jun-2009
Comment from dportwood
Definitely a fun read. You kept the meter going well. The rhyme was great and the message of humor very entertaining. I loved the charm and wit demonstrated in this poem. Good job and good luck.
Duane
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Definitely a fun read. You kept the meter going well. The rhyme was great and the message of humor very entertaining. I loved the charm and wit demonstrated in this poem. Good job and good luck.
Duane
Comment Written 11-Jun-2009
Comment from joan marie
Well, in your moment of insanity you have written a work of brilliance. I loved it. I can't see anyone doing a better acrostic than this. Great writing. Very brave, but great. joan marie
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Well, in your moment of insanity you have written a work of brilliance. I loved it. I can't see anyone doing a better acrostic than this. Great writing. Very brave, but great. joan marie
Comment Written 11-Jun-2009