Karma Kite
Letting go95 total reviews
Comment from joan marie
What a great analogy for letting go and moving on. Your topic works great with this format. I think this is a wonderful message and entry. joan marie
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2009
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What a great analogy for letting go and moving on. Your topic works great with this format. I think this is a wonderful message and entry. joan marie
Comment Written 12-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2009
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Thank you for the great review!
Comment from dragonpoet
Nice poem I like the form of the poem. I kind of seems like shape of the kite in the picute upside and down and
a picture of the kite getting smaller as it gets furthur
away.
Though most people don't like letting kites go. It does show good feelings of release, if you are using the kite as a metaphor for releasing problems.
I have a poem about a kite. It is called "To Be a Kite"
I see no errors. Keep writing.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2009
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Nice poem I like the form of the poem. I kind of seems like shape of the kite in the picute upside and down and
a picture of the kite getting smaller as it gets furthur
away.
Though most people don't like letting kites go. It does show good feelings of release, if you are using the kite as a metaphor for releasing problems.
I have a poem about a kite. It is called "To Be a Kite"
I see no errors. Keep writing.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 12-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2009
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Thank you dragonpoet for the thoughtful review. Your kite poem is lovely as well.
Comment from Deejharrington
The picture is perfect. But your words are more so. I have never read it expressed so or better. We carry around so many karmatic burdens that we need no to. The idea of those burdens being a kite that we allow to fly on the wind captures the feeling.
dj
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2009
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The picture is perfect. But your words are more so. I have never read it expressed so or better. We carry around so many karmatic burdens that we need no to. The idea of those burdens being a kite that we allow to fly on the wind captures the feeling.
dj
Comment Written 12-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2009
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Thank you dj for the great review and heartful thoughts.
Comment from DecrepitOldBag
I'm not the world's biggest fan of the short poetic forms, but sometimes, they do have impact. I can read six or seven things into this piece (from my own personal life experience). Not just a statement, this is advice, consolation and hope all rolled into one.
Warm wishes
Kat
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2009
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I'm not the world's biggest fan of the short poetic forms, but sometimes, they do have impact. I can read six or seven things into this piece (from my own personal life experience). Not just a statement, this is advice, consolation and hope all rolled into one.
Warm wishes
Kat
Comment Written 12-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2009
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Your words are so full of wisdom. Yes, it can be applied to six or seven themes; I didn't see that. Thank you for the eye opener.
Comment from Sally Carter
A great little poem, and your message is something I expect lots of us would benefit from. I will try and remember this next time I am feeling stressed - like right now.... And the answer is to get out of the house and go for a swim. Thanks for the read. Sally
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2009
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A great little poem, and your message is something I expect lots of us would benefit from. I will try and remember this next time I am feeling stressed - like right now.... And the answer is to get out of the house and go for a swim. Thanks for the read. Sally
Comment Written 12-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2009
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thank you Sally for the great reviwe and very wise comments.
Comment from zydecosal
I like your poem and the picture. The colors are very cheerful and signify the joy felt when letting go. Thanks for sharing.
Sally
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2009
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I like your poem and the picture. The colors are very cheerful and signify the joy felt when letting go. Thanks for sharing.
Sally
Comment Written 12-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2009
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Thank you Sally for the great review and comments.
Comment from Kentucky Sweet Pea
This is a good analogy of letting our troubles fly to the wind so that we can enjoy a few moments or hours without our them weighting us down. The imagery is excellent, Amada.
Good luck in the booth!
Pea
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2009
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This is a good analogy of letting our troubles fly to the wind so that we can enjoy a few moments or hours without our them weighting us down. The imagery is excellent, Amada.
Good luck in the booth!
Pea
Comment Written 12-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2009
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Thank you Pea for the warm and witty comments.
Comment from sugardog
Nice job on this! That is what I should have done today-flew my kite. Maybe that would have helped! I like the idea of flying a kite to release the weight of the day and set your troubles free-be a kid again, no worries, ha-ha...Great job, I enjoyed this naani poem:)
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2009
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Nice job on this! That is what I should have done today-flew my kite. Maybe that would have helped! I like the idea of flying a kite to release the weight of the day and set your troubles free-be a kid again, no worries, ha-ha...Great job, I enjoyed this naani poem:)
Comment Written 12-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2009
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Thank you for reading and commenting!
Comment from Oatmeal
Amada,
You did a wonderful job with the challenge that you were given. I think that I counted 22 beats. That was in the range. Good job.
There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2009
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Amada,
You did a wonderful job with the challenge that you were given. I think that I counted 22 beats. That was in the range. Good job.
There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 11-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2009
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Hi Oatmeal, dear friend. I am so glad we are a so faithful reviewer of my work.
Comment from Adri7enne
Yes, if we allow the breeze to get at it, it's easier than trying to blow on it ourselves. Great analogy or letting go and going with the flow, or the breeze. "when I open my hands, release my hold," Too bad we can't seem to internalize that lesson. Good stuff! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2009
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Yes, if we allow the breeze to get at it, it's easier than trying to blow on it ourselves. Great analogy or letting go and going with the flow, or the breeze. "when I open my hands, release my hold," Too bad we can't seem to internalize that lesson. Good stuff! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2009
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Thaank you Adri7enne for the great review.
