Hello, Operator
A little song'll do it35 total reviews
Comment from Donna Thompson
This is so cute...well written..good luck with your contest entry. I wish I knew words to songs..I'm such a dope when it comes to that..great job incorporating them within your story
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
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This is so cute...well written..good luck with your contest entry. I wish I knew words to songs..I'm such a dope when it comes to that..great job incorporating them within your story
Comment Written 23-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
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Donna.. I only remember some of the words to the songs I enjoy. You are not a dope when it comes to this... thank you for reading and commenting, John
Comment from Luis Cannon
364-5789 Wasn't that an 80's song? I didn't see where the piece was going until the very last bit. That was cute. That Timmy must get to hear a lot of oldies to have memorized so many lyrics. I don't really feel adjustments are needed but I can't quite rate it five stars just the same.
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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
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364-5789 Wasn't that an 80's song? I didn't see where the piece was going until the very last bit. That was cute. That Timmy must get to hear a lot of oldies to have memorized so many lyrics. I don't really feel adjustments are needed but I can't quite rate it five stars just the same.
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Comment Written 23-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
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Thank you for stopping and taking the time to read my story, although I am confused as to the four star since you gave no reason for it except "can't quite rate it 5 stars just the same". I worked hard on this so I feel I would deserve an explanation with some substance. I would appreciate one if you would be so kind... Thank you John
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I hope I didn't offend. I honestly felt it was a good work but not excellent as the rating implies. It was cute and had a funny ending but for me it was a bit frivolous and lacked the depth needed to rate five stars. I'm sure everyone rates stories differently. I go about it by comparing works to what I've read and reviewed. I'm too conflicted giving five stars to every piece I read. if a piece doesn't measure up to works I've already given five stars to I feel I would be doing them a disservice to rate what I felt was a lesser piece the same. That of course is just my opinion but it is an honest one.
Comment from IndianaIrish
Oh, I loved this!! I'm a music addict so I loved all your songs and the great ending twist grabbed my mushy heart. An outstanding contest entry and a very enjoyable story, John. Best wishes to you with this fun story. Ya did good!!
Indy :>)
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
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Oh, I loved this!! I'm a music addict so I loved all your songs and the great ending twist grabbed my mushy heart. An outstanding contest entry and a very enjoyable story, John. Best wishes to you with this fun story. Ya did good!!
Indy :>)
Comment Written 23-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
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Indy.. I thought that you would appreciate this story since it constituted some dialogue to many great songs.. thanks for your positive comments and especially for the 6 star!!! You're the best John
Comment from stephonavich
This is adorable! It made me smile. I thought you chose the songs perfectly and caught on right away to what was going on without any exposition. Well done. Good luck on the contest!
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
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This is adorable! It made me smile. I thought you chose the songs perfectly and caught on right away to what was going on without any exposition. Well done. Good luck on the contest!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
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stephanovich.. I am glad you enjoyed it as I had lots of fun writing it. Thanks for the comments. John
Comment from nancyjam
This is very cleverly done and meets the
requirements of the contest. It's so
entertaining - wondering hat song he'll think of
next. I enjoyed the twist at the end. An
enjoyable read.Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
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This is very cleverly done and meets the
requirements of the contest. It's so
entertaining - wondering hat song he'll think of
next. I enjoyed the twist at the end. An
enjoyable read.Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 23-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2010
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nancyjam... I probably could have gone on but the word constraints limited me. Thank you for those positive comments.. John
