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There's a Light Up Ahead

Will I get there first?

33 total reviews 
Comment from adewpearl
Excellent
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Well, a bonus twist at the end - we go from horror to risque. LOL Nothing like a little role-playing to spice up honeymoon sex. ;-) You build suspense well before the big reveal - he was scaring me with that hissing. :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 07-May-2010

reply by the author on 07-May-2010
    Yes, all in the game of love! Thanks Brooke, for your kind and generous review and rating. I am pleased you enjoyed. Warmest regards, Marijke
Comment from DvUsLee Poetic
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Really really enjoyed this. Now i see why you are one of the best on here. Very impressive. Great job. A well deserved 6 star for sure.

 Comment Written 07-May-2010

reply by the author on 07-May-2010
    Wow, thank you so much for this very generous review and rating. I am thrilled, as I can see you were reading this little story of 'intrigue'. Warmest regards and a humble thank you.
    Marijke
Comment from RebelRose
Excellent
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Well, you had me going there, my friend. Very creative and clever. I did see one little nit ... in the third line, delete either [the] or [a]. I really enjoyed this.

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 Comment Written 07-May-2010

reply by the author on 07-May-2010
    Hi RebelRose. Pleased I got you going there! I fixed that nit, thank you for picking up on that. Thanks also for your generous review and rating. Warmest regards, Marijke