Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Let the children play and watch."A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Isaiah Ramesses
This has a truth to it, Gary. The children are our future, and if we watch we see exactly what we are teaching them and reflections of the future. Great job with this.
Isaiah
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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This has a truth to it, Gary. The children are our future, and if we watch we see exactly what we are teaching them and reflections of the future. Great job with this.
Isaiah
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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thanks Isaiah
Comment from zmacgirl
This is excellent and so very true. Children are our future and the one in your picture is adorable. Being able to watch mine embodies all my hopes and dreams.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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This is excellent and so very true. Children are our future and the one in your picture is adorable. Being able to watch mine embodies all my hopes and dreams.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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thanks zmacgirl
Comment from Gideon Roth
Hi there. I was happy to see this post by you. I was thinking of you today and was hoping to see poem by you. I thought this one was well done and carried a great message. Keep up the great writing my friend...Tim, aka, Gideon
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Hi there. I was happy to see this post by you. I was thinking of you today and was hoping to see poem by you. I thought this one was well done and carried a great message. Keep up the great writing my friend...Tim, aka, Gideon
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Thank you Tim for this review myfriend
Comment from prophetess
Excellent poem deepwater, I love the wonderful message of this poem. The free vers flow is smooth and carries with it the love of family.
Prophetess
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Excellent poem deepwater, I love the wonderful message of this poem. The free vers flow is smooth and carries with it the love of family.
Prophetess
Comment Written 17-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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thank you Prop for this review
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you're welcoome deep. :p
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
Your poem is beautiful, my friend. It has a powerful message that can reach all who read. It was my pleasure to read you today. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Your poem is beautiful, my friend. It has a powerful message that can reach all who read. It was my pleasure to read you today. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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thank you El for this review and comments
Comment from fionageorge
This is an excellent poem, my friend, with a very strong and powerful message. I enjoyed the way you have structured the words for best impact. The emotional plea is well worded, the free verse poem flows smoothly.
Thank you for sharing, and let us hope those who need to get this message read this wonderful poem.
Warmest regards, Marijke
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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This is an excellent poem, my friend, with a very strong and powerful message. I enjoyed the way you have structured the words for best impact. The emotional plea is well worded, the free verse poem flows smoothly.
Thank you for sharing, and let us hope those who need to get this message read this wonderful poem.
Warmest regards, Marijke
Comment Written 17-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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thank you Marijke for the review
Comment from blaksurfr
I really like this for it brings to life the future and makes it very personal. This cannot be ignored for they are us and we are they. Only those distracted by booze, drugs, and vanities will be blind to this jewel. Beautiful.
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I really like this for it brings to life the future and makes it very personal. This cannot be ignored for they are us and we are they. Only those distracted by booze, drugs, and vanities will be blind to this jewel. Beautiful.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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don't think i understand your view on this poem
Comment from Auroraboreal800
This is a great little poem with a wonderful and very important message... I liked the solid composition and how smoothly it flows.
The picture is so cute... Really well done!
Regards,
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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This is a great little poem with a wonderful and very important message... I liked the solid composition and how smoothly it flows.
The picture is so cute... Really well done!
Regards,
Comment Written 17-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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thank you Auro for the review
Comment from fishcantswim
Thought provoking and well written.
Parents are often guilty of passing on their own prejudices and failings to children in the name of education, whereas the only way to learn is to make your own mistakes.
Simple, but effective.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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Thought provoking and well written.
Parents are often guilty of passing on their own prejudices and failings to children in the name of education, whereas the only way to learn is to make your own mistakes.
Simple, but effective.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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thank you fish
Comment from luisestable
This is simple prose, not deep poetry or poetry at any level. Every thing smells of prose here. Nothing indicates that this is, in truth, a poem.
I like what you say about children, but I Like it as prose, never as a poem.
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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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This is simple prose, not deep poetry or poetry at any level. Every thing smells of prose here. Nothing indicates that this is, in truth, a poem.
I like what you say about children, but I Like it as prose, never as a poem.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations. have a nice day
