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Comment from Thesis
You really built the suspense with the events of this story, Crol. Thinking affairs, unemployment, poor Margie gatting fired, and Shelly ready to throw up, the ending was an interesting twist. - John
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You really built the suspense with the events of this story, Crol. Thinking affairs, unemployment, poor Margie gatting fired, and Shelly ready to throw up, the ending was an interesting twist. - John
Comment Written 01-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010
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Joh,
While I butted my head up against a wall trying to write the second part of Mistaken Identity..I thought I'd write some humor..Guess my muse still lhad a bit of doom and gloom mulling around..Either that or I am just plain sick. lol Thanks for the review...Carol
Comment from Judian James
OMG ... I'd kill them all!!! Oh, I HATE practical jokes and this was a huge one. Well done. You really had me going Carol. excellent job.
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OMG ... I'd kill them all!!! Oh, I HATE practical jokes and this was a huge one. Well done. You really had me going Carol. excellent job.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010
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Jude,
Me too! I wouldn't have laughed until much later I fear..right after I knocked a few heads togther. I was butting my own head against a wall trying to figure where I wanted the second chapter of Mistaken Identity to go and set out to write a bit of humor..Guess the doom and gloom still got the best of me...Smiles, Carol
Comment from sk42rn
Man, you are so much better than I am, and the character is too! I would not have been good enough to accept that rough of an April Fool's. May be it is my self esteem, but that was Brutal! I would have turned and walked out. Not that I cannot take a joke, but that was a little over the top when you are stressed out and planning a wedding. Good writing and good job.
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Man, you are so much better than I am, and the character is too! I would not have been good enough to accept that rough of an April Fool's. May be it is my self esteem, but that was Brutal! I would have turned and walked out. Not that I cannot take a joke, but that was a little over the top when you are stressed out and planning a wedding. Good writing and good job.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010
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sk42rn,
Oh me too! That's the good thing about writing..no body gets hurt. Thanks for stopping by and for the kind suuport. smiles, Carol
Comment from azwildrosa
that was a great read. i enjoy april fools day. you story flowed smoothly, i noticed one think though. little one really.
her last shred of common sense.[.]
told ya it was little. again a great story. your dialog, believable, a great read. thank you for sharing. :)
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that was a great read. i enjoy april fools day. you story flowed smoothly, i noticed one think though. little one really.
her last shred of common sense.[.]
told ya it was little. again a great story. your dialog, believable, a great read. thank you for sharing. :)
Comment Written 01-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010
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azwildrosa,
Nice to make your acquaintance. I really appreciate yur comments, suggestions and kind thoughts..Smiles to you, Carol
Comment from adewpearl
What an elaborate ruse for them to all plan together - and here I sure was believing she was just having the worst possible day EVER! I love the way the bad news piles on bit by bit, from the trivial news of her favorite sandwich off the menu to the distinct possibility of losing her job to evidence her best friend and fiancee are screwing around! You sure had me fooled, Carol :-) Brooke
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What an elaborate ruse for them to all plan together - and here I sure was believing she was just having the worst possible day EVER! I love the way the bad news piles on bit by bit, from the trivial news of her favorite sandwich off the menu to the distinct possibility of losing her job to evidence her best friend and fiancee are screwing around! You sure had me fooled, Carol :-) Brooke
Comment Written 01-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010
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Brooke,
I was attempting to write the second chapter to Mistaken Identity and the doom and gloom just wouldn't come today...so I decided to have a bit of fun...at Shelly's expense. Nice thing about writing..no one really gets hurt. Thanks for the kind review...Smiles, Carol
Comment from dmjones
Hi Carol, I don't think I would be laughing at a joke like that. It was cruel. It was a well written story and fun to read but I was angry at the end that they took that far. I didn't see any spag.
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Hi Carol, I don't think I would be laughing at a joke like that. It was cruel. It was a well written story and fun to read but I was angry at the end that they took that far. I didn't see any spag.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010
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Donna,
That's the nice thing about writing..no body gets hurt. My mind was up against the wall trying to write the doom and gloom of Mistaken Identy and was looking for some humor...guess i probbly was a little tough on Shelly...but honestly, she didn't feel a thing...Smiles, Carol
Comment from animatqua
What a wicked April Fool's joke!
I suppose I shouldn't talk. Our baby was nearly six months old when one particular April Fools day came around. When I woke my husband up for the day, I told him I was pregnant.
The look on his face was priceless. What he said made me re-think the humor:
"You had me damned if I did and damned if I didn't. If I was happy, you'd be sad because you weren't pregnant. If I was sad, you would be disturbed thinking I didn't want the baby. Bad choice of jokes, Babe!"
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What a wicked April Fool's joke!
I suppose I shouldn't talk. Our baby was nearly six months old when one particular April Fools day came around. When I woke my husband up for the day, I told him I was pregnant.
The look on his face was priceless. What he said made me re-think the humor:
"You had me damned if I did and damned if I didn't. If I was happy, you'd be sad because you weren't pregnant. If I was sad, you would be disturbed thinking I didn't want the baby. Bad choice of jokes, Babe!"
Comment Written 01-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010
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animatqua,
Glad you enjoyed my "sick" sense of humor..I was up against a road block for the next chapter of Mistaken Identity so I changed course and decided to laugh..Glad you enjoyed it!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Missey
You had me going there for a minute. That poor poor girl! Give her a heart attack why don't you. lol. Good story. I like the picture you chose.
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You had me going there for a minute. That poor poor girl! Give her a heart attack why don't you. lol. Good story. I like the picture you chose.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010
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Missey,
Glad you enjoyed my "sick" sense of humor..I was up against a road block for the next chapter of Mistaken Identity so I changed course and decided to laugh..Glad you enjoyed it!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Carol,
Here I was expecting to read Kate and Rob were having an affair! Once again you have an unexpected twist at the end. Love this story and wonder how Shelly gets even. Well done. Blessings, chey
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Hi Carol,
Here I was expecting to read Kate and Rob were having an affair! Once again you have an unexpected twist at the end. Love this story and wonder how Shelly gets even. Well done. Blessings, chey
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Comment Written 01-Nov-2010
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Chey,
Glad you enjoyed my "sick" sense of humor..I was up against a road block for the next chapter of Mistaken Identity so I changed course and decided to laugh..Glad you enjoyed it!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Mander1976
OMG I never saw that ending coming! What a horrible prank to play on someone! I'm glad that's all it was. Poor girl, she was sure having a bad day! Great story -- you kept me hooked.
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OMG I never saw that ending coming! What a horrible prank to play on someone! I'm glad that's all it was. Poor girl, she was sure having a bad day! Great story -- you kept me hooked.
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Comment Written 01-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010
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Mander,
Glad you enjoyed my "sick" sense of humor..I was up against a road block for the next chapter of Mistaken Identity so I changed course and decided to laugh..Glad you enjoyed it!
Smiles, Carol
