Walk In The Dark Forest
Ivan sneaks off the school bus55 total reviews
Comment from ksherwoodrn
Cute story and beautiful picture to match. So true, mothers always seem to know what their kids are up to. And in this case, with much relief I'm sure....kathleen
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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Cute story and beautiful picture to match. So true, mothers always seem to know what their kids are up to. And in this case, with much relief I'm sure....kathleen
Comment Written 27-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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Your comments are most appreciated, Kathleen. Thanks for doing a review for this little story. Marie
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Ivan's a lucky boy. His rescue comes just as his adventure is about to become scary. Well written from the point of view of a young child. :) Nancy
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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Ivan's a lucky boy. His rescue comes just as his adventure is about to become scary. Well written from the point of view of a young child. :) Nancy
Comment Written 27-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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I'm happy to hear you found the viewpoint appropriate for the little guy. Thanks so much for doing a review.
Comment from sailaway7289
I enjoyed this story even though I haven't been a child for quite some time. My favorite sentences "Deep snow comes up to the monster on my lunch pail. Icicles drip from bare, skinny branches and look like sliver knives pointing down at me" bring such vivid imagery to mind. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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I enjoyed this story even though I haven't been a child for quite some time. My favorite sentences "Deep snow comes up to the monster on my lunch pail. Icicles drip from bare, skinny branches and look like sliver knives pointing down at me" bring such vivid imagery to mind. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 27-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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I'm happy to know you enjoyed the scene. Thanks so much for doing a review of this little story.
Comment from Espresso momma
Cute story, not too spooky for a child and yet one that will keep their attention while hearing it read to them. Thanks for the nice read.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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Cute story, not too spooky for a child and yet one that will keep their attention while hearing it read to them. Thanks for the nice read.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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I appreciate your comments. Thanks for taking time to review this little story.
Comment from forestport12
I remember a story different, but in some respects the same. I love how you can create a story that I'm sure excites a child to read it, but at the same time I love the great imagery and simplicity. I think it takes a special talent to reach all ages. You are someone who can do this. Blessings Marie.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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I remember a story different, but in some respects the same. I love how you can create a story that I'm sure excites a child to read it, but at the same time I love the great imagery and simplicity. I think it takes a special talent to reach all ages. You are someone who can do this. Blessings Marie.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2011
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I happened on this story last week, did some rewriting and posted it, totally forgetting it's been on FS before, many months ago. I'm embarassed! But, I sure do appreciate your comments and the time you gave it for review, Stan. Many thanks. Marie
Comment from Carolyn 12
How cute..Poor Ivan-got caught not riding the school bus..Thankfully it was his mom that caught him and no large animal..The picture you used goes really well with your story line..Thanks for sharing..
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2011
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How cute..Poor Ivan-got caught not riding the school bus..Thankfully it was his mom that caught him and no large animal..The picture you used goes really well with your story line..Thanks for sharing..
Comment Written 26-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2011
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Thanks so much for your comments and taking the time to review.
Comment from Belinda
Phew ... luckily mom (always) knows what her kids are up to. The bus driver should be more alert in this case. Nobody gets down before his/her own stop. This is a well written children story with a message.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2011
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Phew ... luckily mom (always) knows what her kids are up to. The bus driver should be more alert in this case. Nobody gets down before his/her own stop. This is a well written children story with a message.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2011
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Thanks for your kind comments and for taking time to do a review.
Comment from Apostate
Thought this was going to end badly for Ivan but it didn't and in the nicest way possible. I liked the ending and what came before it. Writing was good and quite appropriate for children and their parents.
Now, if had written this? Mom would've been a werewolf and cheeky Ivan would've been dinner. But that's me - cheerful to the end. Glad I didn't write this then, eh?
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2011
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Thought this was going to end badly for Ivan but it didn't and in the nicest way possible. I liked the ending and what came before it. Writing was good and quite appropriate for children and their parents.
Now, if had written this? Mom would've been a werewolf and cheeky Ivan would've been dinner. But that's me - cheerful to the end. Glad I didn't write this then, eh?
Comment Written 26-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2011
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You comments are truly amusing. Thanks for your comments and doing the review.
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
A good write and interesting story line, Hi loved the imagery and the way you have written your story. It was a good read and kept me interested. Mary
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2011
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A good write and interesting story line, Hi loved the imagery and the way you have written your story. It was a good read and kept me interested. Mary
Comment Written 26-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2011
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Thanks so much, Mary. I truly appreciate the time and interest you gave this little story.
Comment from WilliamDeen
LOL... MOM always knows ... doesn't she.. and she is scarier than any bear!
Thanks for sharing this story with us, Pamela
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2011
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LOL... MOM always knows ... doesn't she.. and she is scarier than any bear!
Thanks for sharing this story with us, Pamela
Comment Written 26-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2011
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Thanks so much for taking interest in this little story and for the your review.
