Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, susan, i can see why you were inspired by this crazy picture, i enjoyed reading it and liked the ending. i wish you the best of luck in the contest

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011

HI Pam, Please forgive this slow response...I just can't keep up. Thank you for this wonderful review! Susan

Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran

Excellent

A good write and story line. The inspiration and the art work are blended well together. Your display and your story was a good read. Thanks for sharing with me.

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 Comment Written 02-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2011

Hi Mary! HUGS and a thousand thanks for reading this odd story! I'm thrilled you liked it! ")) xoxo susan

Comment from KathyH

Excellent

Perfect Twilight Zone plot. Characters are well developed and the suspense builds quickly. Couldn't stop reading cause it was clear trouble was coming ! Kathy

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 Comment Written 02-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2011

Hey! Thanks Kathy! I love doing these silly things and not many like them! SO, your review is extra special to me! Thank you very very much for taking time to read and review this one! Wow. ")) xoxo! susan