A Wind Chime
A gift In Memory, see author's notes31 total reviews
Comment from Earl of Oxford
Wind chimes is a beautiful idea, Jimi.
I've asked my daughter to scatter my ashes over a pond in a local park near where I spent most of my life, and sponsor a public wooden bench for the public to sit on in the park.
Fabulous metaphors here. There's one in EVERY line, and they're all brilliantly thought-out, appropriate and very moving.
This is a perfect tribute poem, and your heart is huge.
Though the meter is jumpy (LOL) - so what, it's still worth my sixer. To prove I don't toss them around, I still have a couple left on a Saturday.
Take care, lovely lady. Ray
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2012
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Wind chimes is a beautiful idea, Jimi.
I've asked my daughter to scatter my ashes over a pond in a local park near where I spent most of my life, and sponsor a public wooden bench for the public to sit on in the park.
Fabulous metaphors here. There's one in EVERY line, and they're all brilliantly thought-out, appropriate and very moving.
This is a perfect tribute poem, and your heart is huge.
Though the meter is jumpy (LOL) - so what, it's still worth my sixer. To prove I don't toss them around, I still have a couple left on a Saturday.
Take care, lovely lady. Ray
Comment Written 08-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2012
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Hi, Ray, thank you so very much.. hey what do I know about meter? You know that! I have no meter, I am meterless.. ok,, do not go anywhere with that.. lol.. I have to get back to answering reviews and reviewing. Life has been a bit hectic lately and just had to step back for awhile.. again thank you so much. I will take care, lovely man.. jimi
