Comment from Betty Bleen

Excellent

I like this poem, it relates to me because I was married a long time in my first marriage, always in turmoil, always hoping that other person would change. As in your poem, asking why, why do you do this?

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013

Hi Betty,
thank you for your taking on my poem, I am sorry to hear that your first marriage way so tumultuous. Life can only change when we value who we are, then all else will follow. Thank you so much for your review, it is much appreciated.
Kindest thoughts,
James xx

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

Flashes of colours...glazed by the light
Will give us all our tomorrows...
Will save us all the sorrows...
It's that I believe in
It's to that I hold tight

I really like this write a lot JJ. I hope it doesn't mean anything personal. It's always a good bet to believe in the light and follow that. Free flight follows.

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 Comment Written 01-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2013

Hi G,
no nothing personal, well yeah something very personal, 'ME' it's all just about me. Talking to myself again, LOL thank you for your review G, you know I always appreciate what you bring to my table. Kindest thoughts,
James xx

reply by Gungalo on 02-Jun-2013

Oh of course JJ.