Comment from Jade Lawson

Excellent

What a cute picture. Really enjoyed this poem. Indeed you describe in a poem format how happy you are every time Kinley goes to see you with her parents.
Very good last stanza, loved the expression "kissing bug".

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2013

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Comment from J. Dark

Excellent

How delightful that you have put a fun and cute rhyme to this fabulous picture of your granddaughter. Who could possibly skip past this in the listings? It is perfectly adorable and made me smile.

Kindest of regards,

Julie :0)

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2013

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Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

I enjoyed your fun, whimsical
little poem, Barbara.

She bowed her head
With a tear she said,
She bowed her head
And with a tear said, - just a thought - to save repeating she


Margaret

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2013

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2013

Thank you for the kind review. You are the expert when it comes to poetry.

reply by Margaret Snowdon on 03-Nov-2013

That's a lovely thing to say, Barbara - but actually I am so poor with metre and such... but write as I feel, from the heart.

Thank you, my friend.

Margaret

Comment from barrieblakeway

Excellent

Thankyou Barbara. She sure is a cute little mouse. I enjoyed the simplicity of cat and dog attitudes, then the tear from the little kissing bug.Probably she is at the most adorable and hugable age and you just wrote from your lovely heart.
bye

baz

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2013

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Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

A cute poem in six stanzas - rhyming couplets and a good read. The picture is even cuter - you have a gorgeous little granddaughter - very nice poem about a little darling. Regards Dorothy

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2013

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Comment from JMUwrites

Excellent

This quatrain poem is very nice Barbara, so very cute and of course is flawless in delivery!

Thanks for sharing it and all the best to you!

Warmly...

JMU

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2013

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Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

Good complimentary photo. Good use of the aabb rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good perfect rhyming with house/mouse...hug/bug. Good alliteration with my/mouse...makes/me. Good storytelling. Good message that touches my heart. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2013

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Comment from christopherjl

Excellent

This is really cute and so is the photo. I don't believe there is any way to improve on the piece itself at this time. Thanks for sharing! Regards, Christopher.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2013

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Comment from kiwisteveh

Excellent

Hi, Barbara - making one of your rare excursions to this side of the page, I see!

This is cute to match the cute picture and you have some clever rhymes.

We have just had our only grand daughter to stay so I have been tempted into cuteness too....

Steve

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2013

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Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Awwww!! The photograph is just too precious! But your poem is charming as well, Barbara! I'm so pleased to see you writing some poetry. This is so special! You must save it for her. :)

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2013

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2013

Thank you for the kind review. I need something to really touch my heart before I can try poetry.