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The Trining

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A man must discover his identity and destiny.

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Comment from velvetElvis
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good opening...

where am I?
how did I get here?
where did I come from?

I was immediately thinking Jason Bourne here, but you gave it a nice twist.

hope to read more.

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 Comment Written 03-Apr-2014


reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
    Thanks for reading. I realize it was long and I appreciate your hanging in there and honoring me with 5 stars.