The Trining
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "KOJUTAKE"A man must discover his identity and destiny.
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Comment from Ritsal
Okay, I'm hooked. This is a fabulous chapter with more unanswered questions. Is he dead? Is he only spirit? Okay, you must type faster...lol Inquiring minds want to know...who is this woman? Who is Doctor X and what the heck is going on with those lights? The chapter reads at a fast pace, even the narrative is exciting. I didn't stumble over any errors while reading, so assume there are none. That's my story and I'm sticking to it. :D
Good job!
Best wishes,
Rita
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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Okay, I'm hooked. This is a fabulous chapter with more unanswered questions. Is he dead? Is he only spirit? Okay, you must type faster...lol Inquiring minds want to know...who is this woman? Who is Doctor X and what the heck is going on with those lights? The chapter reads at a fast pace, even the narrative is exciting. I didn't stumble over any errors while reading, so assume there are none. That's my story and I'm sticking to it. :D
Good job!
Best wishes,
Rita
Comment Written 14-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2014
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I love it, Rita. Yeah, this is the chapter that opens it wide! All will be explained, but trust me, more mystery will occur. Thank you so much. And, geeze thanks for the 6 stars!
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You are very welcome. You deserve every star in there!