Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "One can say,"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from Carole Rosa
Gary, Probably Not!! I don't have many achievements I'm proud off. AND, I know my kids aren't proud of me for anything! Although, my grandchildren love me and they may be proud of me someday. However, they don't know about achievements now.
Regardless of my state of affairs, you have posted some wonderful pieces of work in the last couple weeks, so I bet your descendant's will remember you, especially if their name is located in your will! Ha.
Seriously, your poem is lovely and the artwork is outstanding. Carole
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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Gary, Probably Not!! I don't have many achievements I'm proud off. AND, I know my kids aren't proud of me for anything! Although, my grandchildren love me and they may be proud of me someday. However, they don't know about achievements now.
Regardless of my state of affairs, you have posted some wonderful pieces of work in the last couple weeks, so I bet your descendant's will remember you, especially if their name is located in your will! Ha.
Seriously, your poem is lovely and the artwork is outstanding. Carole
Comment Written 27-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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thanks for reading Carole, you have achievments you have kids
Gary
Comment from michaelcahill
That is a very thought provoking piece. I would imagine that the accomplishments of the ancestors themselves would have to be taken under scrutiny. But, in general a lack of reverence for the efforts of those that laid the foundations for you probably is going to weaken the foundation you build for your progeny. But, in some cases it is a foundation that should not be stood upon. Mikey
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That is a very thought provoking piece. I would imagine that the accomplishments of the ancestors themselves would have to be taken under scrutiny. But, in general a lack of reverence for the efforts of those that laid the foundations for you probably is going to weaken the foundation you build for your progeny. But, in some cases it is a foundation that should not be stood upon. Mikey
Comment Written 27-Jun-2014
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thanks
Comment from DALLAS01
Great point to ponder. Wonderful art work and some interesting assonance in achievements and ancestors and remembered and descendants.
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Great point to ponder. Wonderful art work and some interesting assonance in achievements and ancestors and remembered and descendants.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2014
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Thank you
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You're welcome.
Comment from reconciled
no ...forgotten as yesterday's breach into tomorrow. unless its importance is honored. Traditional reverence. alright great read...love michael
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no ...forgotten as yesterday's breach into tomorrow. unless its importance is honored. Traditional reverence. alright great read...love michael
Comment Written 26-Jun-2014
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Thank you
Comment from mjac777
Good original saying that brings to light the need to remember history and appreciate sacrifices and accomplishments made by our ancestors. It was very succinctly said and hopefully will encourage those of today to look back with gratefulness of the generations before us.
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Good original saying that brings to light the need to remember history and appreciate sacrifices and accomplishments made by our ancestors. It was very succinctly said and hopefully will encourage those of today to look back with gratefulness of the generations before us.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Victoria K
Your poem is succinct, yet powerful.
It is immediately engaging and thought provoking. The reader must give pause, and consider the insight behind the words.
I love the photo that you paired it with.
Very well done.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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Your poem is succinct, yet powerful.
It is immediately engaging and thought provoking. The reader must give pause, and consider the insight behind the words.
I love the photo that you paired it with.
Very well done.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2014
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Thank you
Comment from lancellot
Now, this is a very moving and profound poem and message. Many people look at the works of the past and shrug as if we owe nothing. What will future generations think of us?
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Now, this is a very moving and profound poem and message. Many people look at the works of the past and shrug as if we owe nothing. What will future generations think of us?
Comment Written 26-Jun-2014
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Thank you for reading mad the 6
Gary
Comment from dreamin'
I am so glad I had a six left. The simplicity of this takes my breath away. This question should be the only one that anyone ever need answer.
Thank you for sharing it.
Debbie
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I am so glad I had a six left. The simplicity of this takes my breath away. This question should be the only one that anyone ever need answer.
Thank you for sharing it.
Debbie
Comment Written 26-Jun-2014
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Thank you for reading dreamin and the 6
Gary
Comment from ravenblack
Considering that I lived and worked with the Lakota, that in the old days tribal decisions were made in consideration of how they would impact the seventh generation of the seventh generation and considering that my ancestors have made a royal mess of things so that there may not be enough left to sustain a few generations down the road, I prefer to break away and am stronger for it.
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Considering that I lived and worked with the Lakota, that in the old days tribal decisions were made in consideration of how they would impact the seventh generation of the seventh generation and considering that my ancestors have made a royal mess of things so that there may not be enough left to sustain a few generations down the road, I prefer to break away and am stronger for it.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Shirley B
Dear deepwater, I really love this thought provoking poem. It comes at a very true time for me. A well know native american artist passed away a couple of days ago. He was from my home town. He was about 88 years old. I grew up with all of his kids. He painted on rocks he found on the side of the road. They were beautiful. I now realize so many things I took for granted growing up in Oklahoma was a blessing. Your poem reminded me of him. His name was Phillip Coon. Thanks for sharing, Shirley
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Dear deepwater, I really love this thought provoking poem. It comes at a very true time for me. A well know native american artist passed away a couple of days ago. He was from my home town. He was about 88 years old. I grew up with all of his kids. He painted on rocks he found on the side of the road. They were beautiful. I now realize so many things I took for granted growing up in Oklahoma was a blessing. Your poem reminded me of him. His name was Phillip Coon. Thanks for sharing, Shirley
Comment Written 26-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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Thank you Shirley for reading
Gary
