Comment from Maggieluv

Excellent

The words express the emotions demonstrated in the picture. I was transported to that awful place. Amazing choice of descriptive language. Great work!

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2014

Thank you

Comment from Drew Delaney

Excellent

Very good poetry, deepwater.

A suggestion:
Our soul has traveled to the halls of purgatory, I wonder if (through) would work better rather than to. Just a thought!

This is a powerfully written poem. Very well thought out. Keep up the great work!

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014

Thanks Drew

Comment from DALLAS01

Excellent

I always felt purgatory is where we are right now. Some very descriptive verbs and adjectives paint a vivid imagery. Not anywhere I care to visit.

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014

Thank you

Comment from jlsavell

Excellent

deepwater, intense and vividly dark. The reader is evoked to peer into the mind of such a write. Humanity has never risen to the pinnacle of true reverence. well done.. jlsavell

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014

Thank you

Comment from Robin Gilmor

Excellent

Sad and dark verse of man. Yet you have projected it in a clear and meaningful manner that tells your version of ones rise and fall. Smiles to
you, robin :)

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014

Thanks Robin

Comment from Auroraboreal800

Excellent

Very nice flow, very well written, this poem has a surrealistic fantasy, but also real fact... Wonderful use of words. The art work is just amazing.
Great job Deepwater!

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014

Thank you

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi GW,

Superb artwork to compliment your great poem. What you say has so much truth in it. As the saying goes, 'Karma's a bitch.'

Spot on presentation.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax ('^')

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014

Thanks jax

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Let's say yes.......still beating with loss of faith in humanity........
Dignity lost,with illusions of drowning...a reality.............
Dark imagery
God bless

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014

thank you

Comment from victoria gbadebo

Excellent

An excellent piece indeed, i love the story within the poem, the style, the emotion was portrayed , most importantly, i love the art in the poem. Thumbs up.

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014

Thank you Victoria

Gary

Comment from Dave Russell

Exceptional

Dark excellence with this write. An intense description of the fall of man. These are cold shadows that inspire your words, but certainly your imagery is accurate. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Aug-2014

thank you Dave