A Christmas Rescue
A Magical Christmas Tale45 total reviews
Comment from emrpoems
Well developed characters
Go mix of narrative and natural dialogue
hope Santa is able to continue his efforts will all he economies slipping and sliding
Well written and holds ht reader's attention right to the end
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
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Well developed characters
Go mix of narrative and natural dialogue
hope Santa is able to continue his efforts will all he economies slipping and sliding
Well written and holds ht reader's attention right to the end
Comment Written 24-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
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Thank you so much for reading and the review. Glad you likes it.
Comment from amahra
Congratulations, this was, in deed, a wonderful and magical Christmas story. So original and very well written. It should work really well with all the other Christmas stories we read each year.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
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Congratulations, this was, in deed, a wonderful and magical Christmas story. So original and very well written. It should work really well with all the other Christmas stories we read each year.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
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Thank you very much for your gracious review. It is much appreciated
Comment from Nosha17
That was such a lovely story, so fitting for this Christmas season with its heart-warming message. Well narrated with great characters and good nostalgic feeling about times gone by. Most enjoyable read and congrats on your win. Faye
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2014
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That was such a lovely story, so fitting for this Christmas season with its heart-warming message. Well narrated with great characters and good nostalgic feeling about times gone by. Most enjoyable read and congrats on your win. Faye
Comment Written 23-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2014
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Thank you for the review. I am very glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from gypsycaravan
So glad you found a way to bring back the magic. What a delightful story. I do think personally that homemade gifts are the only real true gifts. Great story.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2014
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So glad you found a way to bring back the magic. What a delightful story. I do think personally that homemade gifts are the only real true gifts. Great story.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2014
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Thank you for your kind review. I agree about homemade stuff. My wife makes truly wonderful gifts
Comment from Herkjv1611
The story lines has many features on fantasy. Magic is a tricky thing. Magicians studied their manners on how to use brain and eyes. The audience is manage through the focus of their eyes.Use of hands is another thing. In this story, mentioning about Santa, the elves, magical senses are developed. This is a good combination. Thanks for the nice entertainment on magic.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2014
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The story lines has many features on fantasy. Magic is a tricky thing. Magicians studied their manners on how to use brain and eyes. The audience is manage through the focus of their eyes.Use of hands is another thing. In this story, mentioning about Santa, the elves, magical senses are developed. This is a good combination. Thanks for the nice entertainment on magic.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2014
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Not sure what this review had to do with the story but thanks for reading and the rating.
Comment from Shari1962
Your story is well written. I love the way you brought in the leprechaun and the rainbow as well as the fairy, imp, sprite, pixie, and gremlin.
Technology has become a necessity in our modern world, but it has also indeed "killed the magic" of wonder and the simplicity of life.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2014
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Your story is well written. I love the way you brought in the leprechaun and the rainbow as well as the fairy, imp, sprite, pixie, and gremlin.
Technology has become a necessity in our modern world, but it has also indeed "killed the magic" of wonder and the simplicity of life.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2014
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Thank you so much for reading and the very generous rating. Glad you enjoyed it
Comment from Dean Kuch
Seems as if Santa's in quite a quandary, and rightly so I should think. Given the state of many economies worldwide, the absence of joy and peace in the world, he's probably had to "lay-off" the majority of his staff.
Well, in your well written story, at least, and with the help of Gremlins, Leprechauns, pixies, imps and faeries, Santa was able to restore some of that old magic that seemed so lost.
Well done, a great entry for this particular contest. I wish you the very best of luck. ~Dean
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2014
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Seems as if Santa's in quite a quandary, and rightly so I should think. Given the state of many economies worldwide, the absence of joy and peace in the world, he's probably had to "lay-off" the majority of his staff.
Well, in your well written story, at least, and with the help of Gremlins, Leprechauns, pixies, imps and faeries, Santa was able to restore some of that old magic that seemed so lost.
Well done, a great entry for this particular contest. I wish you the very best of luck. ~Dean
Comment Written 21-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2014
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Thank you for taking the time to read and for your kind review. All the best.
Comment from Zue65
Well, this is obviously like making the occult and magic acceptable , just like making something sinister and dark common and ordinary and that there is nothing to hide. This is like mind control, slowly implanting the teachings of witchcraft in subtle ways, using a seemingly harmless Santa and an innocent fantasy fiction as an instrument to twist truth. This is my own personal interpretation and I don't impose my truth on the author. May Jesus bless you.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2014
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Well, this is obviously like making the occult and magic acceptable , just like making something sinister and dark common and ordinary and that there is nothing to hide. This is like mind control, slowly implanting the teachings of witchcraft in subtle ways, using a seemingly harmless Santa and an innocent fantasy fiction as an instrument to twist truth. This is my own personal interpretation and I don't impose my truth on the author. May Jesus bless you.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2014
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I'm sorry but I don't understand your review at all but thank you for reading.
Comment from K. Lorraine
This was a delightful to use the sentence starter of believing in magic and using it in a magical holiday story. Christmas is rooted in magic. It was wonderful to see how all of the new characters you brought into the story to help Santa find a way out of his blue funk with their magical plan. This story was cute and maybe even a new holiday story to tell along with all of the old favorite Christmas stories... I too like the idea of abolishing 'black Friday and Cyber Monday.' I loved the ending. Wonderful... This was definitely a different take on MAGIC. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2014
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This was a delightful to use the sentence starter of believing in magic and using it in a magical holiday story. Christmas is rooted in magic. It was wonderful to see how all of the new characters you brought into the story to help Santa find a way out of his blue funk with their magical plan. This story was cute and maybe even a new holiday story to tell along with all of the old favorite Christmas stories... I too like the idea of abolishing 'black Friday and Cyber Monday.' I loved the ending. Wonderful... This was definitely a different take on MAGIC. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2014
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Thank you very much for your kind encouragement and I am glad you liked the story.
Comment from Annette Gulliver
I loved your magic story. Yes, the magic of Christmas has gone, what with all the commercialism these days. Very witty conversations and your description of the elves and imps etc were great. Interesting twist with the sabotage of website shops. Brought it into the 21st century. Hope Santa feels better now
good luck in the contest...
Annette
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2014
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I loved your magic story. Yes, the magic of Christmas has gone, what with all the commercialism these days. Very witty conversations and your description of the elves and imps etc were great. Interesting twist with the sabotage of website shops. Brought it into the 21st century. Hope Santa feels better now
good luck in the contest...
Annette
Comment Written 20-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2014
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Thanks for reading and the feedback. Much appreciated
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you are welcome...
