Comment from JasmineNikki

Excellent

Very chilling and the motivation to commit such an act is believable.
I enjoyed reading this flash fiction. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 25-May-2015

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reply by the author on 25-May-2015

Thanks very much for your encouragement, Jasmine. I sincerely appreciate that! :)

Comment from sandragee

Excellent

A well-written tale of love, hate, infidelity and murder. The line 'You betrayed my trust, despoiled our love' informs us something bad is going to happen, and the line 'Too bad you're both still breathing' lets us know the worst has happened. The last line is great. It's his justification for what he's done. Good job.

 Comment Written 25-May-2015

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reply by the author on 25-May-2015

Thanks for reading, and for your review, Sandra. It is appreciated.

Comment from MelB

Excellent

Adultery, the ultimate act of betrayal. I think this would turn joy into a blinding hatred. I was thinking at first, he was just burying his wife alive; but on a second read and looking at the pics, I think he has buried the lover also. Absolutely chilling and terrifying! Very clever ending and twist on the marital oath.

 Comment Written 24-May-2015

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reply by the author on 25-May-2015

Thanks for reading, and for your review, Mel. It is appreciated.

reply by MelB on 25-May-2015

You're welcome

Comment from amahra

Excellent

Wow those art works are chilling. I can't think of a worse death then being buried alive. You did great with your descriptive writing in just one hundred words. Great contest entry.

 Comment Written 24-May-2015

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reply by the author on 25-May-2015

Thanks for reading, and for your review, Amahra. It is appreciated.

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Nothing more horrifying than being buried alive. I don't blame the guy at all. I've just recently been betrayed by two people I loved, one for twenty years. I wouldn't murder them, but I hope they will suffer and regret their heartless choice to throw me under the bus. So I really like this one and will probably vote for it. :)

 Comment Written 24-May-2015

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reply by the author on 25-May-2015

Thanks very much for reading my story, Phyllis. You're right, it feels horrible to be betrayed by someone you love. I sincerely appreciate your review.

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

Now this is a a horror story, burying a cheating spouse and her lover alive. Betrayal is hard to take and certainly hurts. Looks like your character is taking revenge to the extreme. No chance for forgiveness here.

Good luck in the contest with this gruesome tale.

 Comment Written 24-May-2015

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reply by the author on 25-May-2015

Thanks so much for reading, and for your review as well, Debi. It is appreciated.

Comment from Craigitar

Excellent

Well written, conceived and delivered story. This fits the theme of the contest perfectly. Good creep factor being buried alive. Great job and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 24-May-2015

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reply by the author on 25-May-2015

Thanks for reading, and for your review. I also appreciate your good luck wishes for the contest, Craig. I'm pleased to know that you enjoyed the story, my friend.
Thanks again!

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

You sound like-never mind. And what would Princess Di be doing if she were alive today? Clawing hell outa that casket. I didn't count the words, after seeing
your note. Excellent.

 Comment Written 24-May-2015

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reply by the author on 24-May-2015

Thanks, LIJ Red. Yeah, Princess Di would be clawing her manicured nails off the nubs to get outta there, no doubt.
Much obliged for the review.

Comment from meggie13

Excellent

The picture mirrors your thriller/ horror. The husband was devastated from his wife's infidelity. He buried her and her lover alive , "till death do us part". He kept his part of his oath. What a terrible death to endure! Well written with very good imagery. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-May-2015

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reply by the author on 24-May-2015

Thanks very much for taking the time and effort to read and review the story, Meggie. I sincerely appreciate your encouraging feedback. :)

reply by meggie13 on 24-May-2015

You are very welcome. Good contender for the contest, you have my vote.

reply by the author on 24-May-2015

Thank you. ;)

reply by meggie13 on 24-May-2015

You are welcome.

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Well, Dean, you should keep this one away from the wife. She may not understand it's only fiction. Love the subject choice, infidelity has been on everyone's mind at a time, so has vengeance. Well done.

 Comment Written 24-May-2015

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reply by the author on 24-May-2015

Thank you, Lance, and believe me, I'll do just that.
Thanks for taking the time to review my story. I sincerely appreciate your feedback. :}