Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

Well, that young chap was full term,then some. Nice of the nurse to give him a hand. Another short sharp gouge of terror, moving fast and smooth.Excellent.

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015

Thanks for taking time out to read and comment, Red.
Much obliged.
Always with respect
~Dean

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

This is definitely creepy, to say the least. But that phone ringing scared the hell out of me, it actually made me jump out of my chair. Great work with this one, as always, but warn us to turn down the sound next time, I don't think my heart can take much more phone ringing.

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015

Hahaha, I'll try to remember that, Smurph.
Thanks a bunch for reading and commenting.
Always with respect
~Dean ;}

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Dean

_ You just gotta watch out for those bouncing baby boys sporting razor sharp teeth! (*<*)
_ Love the background effects. Superb.
_ As always, a great job.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015

Thanks, Jax!
~Dean

Comment from Linda Engel

Excellent

really? titillating? Aren't all MALE babies that hungry? Clever little tale for your book. I am surprised that the little booger didn't gnaw his way out. Poor mummy and daddy.
(bite the hand that feeds you.... *sigh*)

That's a good one Dean.

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015

Hahaha, thanks, Linda. I really appreciate you takin' time to read and review this Tiny Tale for me.
Much obliged...
~Dean ;}

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Great job as usual, my friend. I love the ending and the audio.

Good writing from start to finish:

"Holy hell...what the ... there goes one a' my wife's nurses now, spewin' blood, slobberin' all over the damn place. And her hand... where the hell is -her hand?"

Blessings, Bob

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015

Hahaha, thanks, Bob, my man. I really appreciate you takin' time to read and review this Tiny Tale for me.
Much obliged...
~Dean ;}

reply by Mastery on 20-Oct-2015

Your fave holiday isn't far off, Mr Halloween man. LOL

reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015

Nope, it's not, Bob. Just eleven days, five hours, forty-two minutes and thirty-three seconds away...not that I'm countin' down or anything... ;)

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Breast feeding is out of the question, I suppose, and any rubber nipple would be shredded, so my guess is the child won't survive. Hope it doesn't chew its way out of its little white coffin. Muahahaaaa....

You're a sick dude, you know that? Of course you do. :)

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015

I think this irrrisistable infant would find more than enough meat to munch on to survive, Phyllis. Unless the doctors simply decided to put the poor little fella out of its misery, of course.

As for me being a "sick puppy", well yeah, so I've often been told, LOL.

Thsnks a bunch for your review and kind comments. I deeply appreciate both your time and review.

Always with respect
~Dean ;-)

Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

Yikes - I'll be glad when Thursday's over and
the stents have been inserted in my arteries,
then I might feel less jumpy every time I read
one of your creepy tales - the moment I hit
on your name, my heart jumps before I've started
reading - the phone ringing did it this time....



what an imagination.


Margaret

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015

Hahaha, thanks, Margaret. I really appreciate you takin' time to read and review this Tiny Tale for me.
Much obliged...
~Dean ;}

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

Fright night is alive and well
and so is the terrible little tyke
Is this Max Planck
getting payback for "constantly" talking
about alien things in the universe
Poor Kirsten, a distant relative of Rosemary,
will mother's instinct prevail
or will she take to the bottle in more ways than one
A tiny tale that grows
on you or in you
or maybe a tale that simply consumes you
Excellent Halloween edition, my friend

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015

Hahaha, thanks, rspoet. I really appreciate you takin' the required time to read and review this Tiny Tale for me.
Much obliged...
~Dean ;}

Comment from Michaelk

Excellent

What's with the weird A's and question marks? Was that a glitch or intentional? If it was intentional, it ended up being more distracting than anything.
I loved the story. I'm surprised there was still a wife left. If the 'baby' got hungry, it might chew on mommy's belly.
'Silent, always smiling' was a nice touch. :)
Another great Tiny Tale birthed into the world of Fanstory.
Awww...isn't he cute?

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015

Haha, no, Mike, it was not intentional, I assure you. I wrote this on my cell. Apparently the Fanstory Gremlins got ahold of it in an attempt to ruin me.
They're doing a hell of a job at it.
Look it over again, let me know if all those fu@ked up characters have been disposed of.
Thanks...

reply by Michaelk on 20-Oct-2015

I sent you an email saying that they were gone. My phone gets weird sometimes.

Comment from petalangela

Excellent

I am so thrilled. I know this sounds all wrong. But I always thought your work was perfect and felt bad about mine. But yessssss. You have a HALLOWEEN spag gremiln attack you here. I feel normal again wellll.

As to the story I guess bottle feelings of blood is the answer. The cost will bleed you dry.

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2015

Haha, yeah, my computer bit the dust and I wrote and posted this from my smartphone, Petal. Go figure...

Hey, but thanks for the comments just the same. Hopefully I've managed to eradicate all those pesky gremlins. If not, I'm sure there are many others who will let me know.
~Dean