Comment from alleewin

Excellent

I've got goosebumps! Your story certainly has a surprise ending. I was expecting a 'Three Bears Ending.'
I liked the story and your picture complements it.
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016

Thank you so much, Alleewin, for taking time to read my story. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)

Comment from Tpa

Excellent

You have indeed embarked upon a difficult genre. So little words a story must convey. You did well, engaging in a good start, leaving with a scary ending. Your twist was good. I wish you well in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016

Thank you so much, Tpa, for taking time to read my story. The traveler something in the woods that he never knew existed. LOL! Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)

Comment from light

Excellent

Thus short story is set up well. I certainly didn't expect the frightening ending. I wish you much success in the contest
Elaine

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016

Thank you so much, Elaine, for taking time to read my story. The traveler learned there are more things in the woods than he ever knew existed. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)

Comment from barkingdog

Excellent

I'm a little confused at to what happened.
Did the front door slam or did something slam against it?
I'm assuming an animal ate whoever made the stew.
:) e

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016

"Startled by a slam against the door, I sprang from bed, . . . " The traveler learned there are things in the wilderness that he never knew existed. Thanks for taking time to read my story. Yes, I like to make the reader do a little thinking for themselves by leaving things so that they can go more than one way. Letting them decide how they hope things turn out. Your generous review is greatly appreciated. :-)

Comment from oliver818

Excellent

Nice story, well done! 100 words is not a lot yet you
Managed to lay out a story very quickly. Good luck for the contest and have a great day!

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016

Thank you so much, Oliver818, for taking time to read my story. Well, at least part of the owner showed up, and now the traveler will soon learn about things that he never knew existed in the woods. LOL! Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

What a way to end a story! This is really good, you have a good start and detail that builds to the climax with a wolf in the room with the possible limb of the owner of the cabin. Hmm, how do you get out of that one? Excellent, and good luck! xx

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016

Thank you so much, Sandra Mitchell, for taking time to read my story. Yes, the leg belongs to the owner of the cabin, but the traveler will soon learn about things in the woods that he never knew existed. LOL! Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)

reply by Sandra Stoner-Mitchell on 12-Sep-2016

Oh, I'm really pleased there is more! xx

Comment from Jim Lorson Sr

Excellent

Oops, something was seriously wrong with whomever owns this cabin. I'd be anxious to get the heck out of there. This is an excellent flash fiction contest entry. The artwork picture is a perfect compliment to your story! I wish you good luck,,,,,,Jim

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016

Thank you so much, Jim, for taking time to read my story. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)

Comment from Susan Chetcuti

Excellent

This story had me wanting more. It reminded me a little of little red riding hood, but an adult version. The picture you chose for your story looks inviting. Well done.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016

Thank you so much for taking time to read my story. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Awesome way to end a well spent day.

Knowing you are about to become dinner, as exemplified by the bloody leg.

That imagery is top notch.

Should make for an interesting entry into this contest.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016

Thank you so much, Brett Mathew West, for taking time to read my story. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Uh-oh.
This story gives a whole new meaning to the term, I'm having an old friend for dinner, especially when you're about to become the main entree.
YIKES!
Good little horror short.
I hope you do very well in the contest.
Dessert, anyone?
~Dean :}

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2016

Yes, he will soon understand about dangers in the woods that he never new existed. Thank you so much, Dean Kuch, for taking time to read my story. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)