Politicians
Political loop49 total reviews
Comment from smileycloud
gooooooooood loop
content is very strong and powerful
the message is clearly and vividly delivered
you do not loose anything in this form for it's meaning at all well domne
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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gooooooooood loop
content is very strong and powerful
the message is clearly and vividly delivered
you do not loose anything in this form for it's meaning at all well domne
have a smiley day
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Thank you smileycloud, this might mean I am improving, many thanks, this is encouraging****kahpot
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Blessings
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The author's words are filled with truth, strength, and
confrontation. I really liked this poem - what I found on my own journey
is that there are politics in every aspect of life. I found that your poem
challenged the reader to ask the question "how can we make a difference".
I don't have a answer but thank you for your poem and the statement of seeing reality. The artwork is perfect.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Excellent Poem! The author's words are filled with truth, strength, and
confrontation. I really liked this poem - what I found on my own journey
is that there are politics in every aspect of life. I found that your poem
challenged the reader to ask the question "how can we make a difference".
I don't have a answer but thank you for your poem and the statement of seeing reality. The artwork is perfect.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much, this is a very understanding and excellent review, many thanks****kahpot
Comment from dragonpoet
This poetry form is fitting to describe politics and politicians. It and they seem very loopy most of the time. They seem to listen to themselves more than they listen to their base.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragon
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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This poetry form is fitting to describe politics and politicians. It and they seem very loopy most of the time. They seem to listen to themselves more than they listen to their base.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragon
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much and yes loopy they are****kahpot
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You're welcome.
Joan
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm not sure if politicians know what the truth is. Once they come into office, it seems some force takes them over and suddenly the only ones they look after are themselves and other politicians. Well done on the loop poem, it read delightfully smoothly. Good luck in the contest. ) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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I'm not sure if politicians know what the truth is. Once they come into office, it seems some force takes them over and suddenly the only ones they look after are themselves and other politicians. Well done on the loop poem, it read delightfully smoothly. Good luck in the contest. ) Sandra xx
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much and yes you have got that right they do look after themselves****kahpot
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
You have this loop perfectly done as each sentence is a given on its own. Very well done and I love the line on the truth the best of all. Very well done
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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You have this loop perfectly done as each sentence is a given on its own. Very well done and I love the line on the truth the best of all. Very well done
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much for your help, I think I am learning, many thanks****kahpot
Comment from His Grayness
Directly from my heart and soul, my first thought is AMEN! The truth is written here and the shame of it all is not less than clear as a bell...the bell of Freedom! I'm so very disappointed with the nonsense, dishonesty, game playing, and irresponsibility of our so-called politicians who have supposedly sworn on their honor (which clearly does not exist) to serve the people of USA with truth and integrity. I personally know Pres. Trump and know him to be a man of truth and honesty, although, no doubt, an angry and ugly fighter who stands for what HE BELIEVES. and I believe, that's good for America, in spite of the blood on the field. HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Directly from my heart and soul, my first thought is AMEN! The truth is written here and the shame of it all is not less than clear as a bell...the bell of Freedom! I'm so very disappointed with the nonsense, dishonesty, game playing, and irresponsibility of our so-called politicians who have supposedly sworn on their honor (which clearly does not exist) to serve the people of USA with truth and integrity. I personally know Pres. Trump and know him to be a man of truth and honesty, although, no doubt, an angry and ugly fighter who stands for what HE BELIEVES. and I believe, that's good for America, in spite of the blood on the field. HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much, and I hope Trump can help****kahpot
Comment from apky
Hullo Friend,
Received your new post(s). But I've been away last week and still will have little time to review all that I have in my messages box.
So this is my little apology to let you know I'm a bit indisposed at the moment and can't give the kind of comprehensive review I normally do for your chapters and posts. We have a very dear family friend who has been hospitalized and operated on, so I spend most days at the clinic and sorting out business paperwork.
I know it's a fake five stars, more or less. Please accept.
All the best,
Apky
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Hullo Friend,
Received your new post(s). But I've been away last week and still will have little time to review all that I have in my messages box.
So this is my little apology to let you know I'm a bit indisposed at the moment and can't give the kind of comprehensive review I normally do for your chapters and posts. We have a very dear family friend who has been hospitalized and operated on, so I spend most days at the clinic and sorting out business paperwork.
I know it's a fake five stars, more or less. Please accept.
All the best,
Apky
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Many thanks for letting me know, and best wishes to you and yours****kahpot
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written loop poem. Politicians are not always trustworthy and never keep their promises they made. They have four years to do that and sometimes eight years without fulfilling any promises.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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A very well-written loop poem. Politicians are not always trustworthy and never keep their promises they made. They have four years to do that and sometimes eight years without fulfilling any promises.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much, yes they do have a long time to prove themselves****kahpot
Comment from jenintorre
This is an excellent loop poem. I thought it was very cleverly written and loved the message it portrayed. So very true. Good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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This is an excellent loop poem. I thought it was very cleverly written and loved the message it portrayed. So very true. Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It's the hardes job in the world and a minefield of intrigue and underhandedness. You can't be all things to all men and with the media a black picture can be painted when many are innocent and only trying to do a good job. To get to the truth is a hopeless task, and it takes a special kind of person to take on such a job. Our own Prime minster Teresa May is doing her best, but is getting little support from her own party and the opposition use dastardly tactics to bring her down. She can be delicate and vulnerable, although she says she is rescillient, you can only take so much back-stabbing. I think I see your argument from a different point of view, but you certainly got me thinking with your questioning write about Politicians. Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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It's the hardes job in the world and a minefield of intrigue and underhandedness. You can't be all things to all men and with the media a black picture can be painted when many are innocent and only trying to do a good job. To get to the truth is a hopeless task, and it takes a special kind of person to take on such a job. Our own Prime minster Teresa May is doing her best, but is getting little support from her own party and the opposition use dastardly tactics to bring her down. She can be delicate and vulnerable, although she says she is rescillient, you can only take so much back-stabbing. I think I see your argument from a different point of view, but you certainly got me thinking with your questioning write about Politicians. Love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much, I see what your saying, maybe it's not politicians helping but fighting politicians, very well said and I will pay more attention, many thanks****kahpot
