Love
Love Life34 total reviews
Comment from GracieAnn
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This Love Poem Poetry Contest contest entry is well constructed and step by step leads the reader to understanding the progression of love with each event in the lines. Well done! All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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K,
This Love Poem Poetry Contest contest entry is well constructed and step by step leads the reader to understanding the progression of love with each event in the lines. Well done! All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your loop poem "Love". You followed all the rules for this genre.
All the best in the contest.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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I enjoyed reading your loop poem "Love". You followed all the rules for this genre.
All the best in the contest.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from lyenochka
Great work in creating an acrostic loop poem and it starts just as it ends with "living."
It is full of connections about the joy of found 'true love.'
Just one grammar issue:
"Void imploded from loves embrace " (love's)
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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Great work in creating an acrostic loop poem and it starts just as it ends with "living."
It is full of connections about the joy of found 'true love.'
Just one grammar issue:
"Void imploded from loves embrace " (love's)
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Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much, I must ask would it then mean (Love's) embrace " Love is embrace", sorry but I am a bit confused still trying to understand some words****kahpot
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It is confusing because the apostrophe is used for contractions like you mentioned but it is also used as the possessive. I believe your words mean 'the embrace of Love' which would be "Love's embrace"
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Many thanks and I will agree and comply, I mean this in the best way, and thank you for helping me****kahpot
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good love poem.
Well written, and you did it as a loop poem.
The message is clear.
Love the picture.
Good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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This is a good love poem.
Well written, and you did it as a loop poem.
The message is clear.
Love the picture.
Good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
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Comment Written 05-Nov-2017
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
