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A prayer, then the walk through our marriage.
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Comment from
lyenochka
A very earnest prayer and since it is a prayer, it is an "ode" because it addresses our Heavenly Father. It expresses love directly to God and asks in the last line for guidance.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good and blessed Sunday.
Comment from
Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 ode in honor of God whom you adore more than anybody knows. A protector guide He will always be for us our heavenly father.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good and blessed Sunday.
Comment from
Mimi Linny
Lovely prayer in your 5-7-5 Ode poem. You've creatively combined a short, 22-syllable piece of work into a well-written piece that conveys a loving tribute to God. Nicely done and much luck in the contest!
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Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good and blessed Sunday.
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