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Soulmates

For a departed loved one

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Comment from ronnie k
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The spiritual suggestion is sad but it reached my heart and allow4ed love too step forward enjoy the glory of praise, God bless you.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
    Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from themundanegirl
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This is a beautiful yet simple poem that was written so perfectly. I wish you the very best in your contest. Thank you for sharing such a price of art with the world. Have a nice night!

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
    Thank you for your excellent review****kahpot
Comment from kiwijenny
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Aw this is so sweet..I think the loved ones never leave our mind and heart.
Well penned ..the drawing too.
Depart from this world
and find peace with my blessing ...I love that
God bless

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
    Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Deirdre Anne Gialamas
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Dear Kahpot,

**Like how you expressed (your) feelings to a loved one.
**The reader understands that you are giving someone
'permission' to leave this world?
** Word choice is perfect.
** Thought- provoking idea to let someone go if their time is up.

Warmest wishes
and best of luck n contest.
Deirdre Anne

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
    Thank you very much for you wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from Old Soldier
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Nice write. acceptance of a loss knowing that they are always with you. not bad. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing and reviewing.

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 Comment Written 23-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
    Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from misscookie
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The artwork you choose to go with your poem is lovely and a perfect match for your write
I love the words they touched me deeply
Thank you for sharing
Cookie

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
    Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Craigitar
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Nicely done! The rules of Japanese poetry are mostly incomprehensible, in my opinion, but because I like your first Tanka, I think you got it right. Your syllable count was correct and there was no rhyming (that's the total of what I know about Tanka poetry). I like the sentiment of the poem. You did very well. Luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
    Thank you very much and it's great to know I got it right many thanks****kahpot
Comment from royowen
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I love conciliatory tone of the tanka you've written my friend. This is exactly how I feel about my wife, these are very positive things to write, a great entry in this contest, well done, blessings, Roy

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 Comment Written 23-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
    Thank you very much, much appreciated****kahpot
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    Welcome
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
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Depart from this world
and find peace with my blessing
I'll stay, in comfort
knowing your soul is my mate
From me, you shall never leave ...
Such a touching poem I forgot it was even a tanka...brilliance. Stunning work well done love and regards Meia xx

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 Comment Written 23-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
    Thank you very much for your excellent review****kahpot