Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This was well written with great theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content and Objective Content were both Excellent and Exceptional.
Thanks for this and have a blessed day.
Dr Ricky 1024.

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 Comment Written 12-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018

Thank you, Ricky, for your lovely review. I really appreciated it. :)) Sandra xx

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi, Sandra,

Oh goody! This first chapter has us off to a good start, and I can't wait to see what your research into the women's movement will bring to the story. I like the idea that 'the powers that be' found it in their hearts to bring Mildred back to the family.

Looking forward to more,

~patty~

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 Comment Written 12-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018

We couldn't leave Mildred out, but she was getting older and needed a revamp, lol. I've booked myself in for one, too!! 28 would be perfect for me. LOL. Thanks, Patty, I glad you enjoyed my opening part. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx