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This Time - That Time 3

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Third book in the time travel trilogy

32 total reviews 
Comment from tfawcus
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Now things are beginning to fall into place!
I find that writing in a particular dialect or social stratum is difficult to sustain, and I was particularly impressed by the way you handled Mildred's longer stretches of dialogue, keeping true to character without overdoing it.
I can't wait to see how this unfolds.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2018
    Thank you so very much for the lovely six stars, Tony! I've always had a soft spot for Mildred, she's not as dopey as she makes out she it, lol. I'm really glad you like the way I portray her. Thanks for this lovely review, my friend. Big hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from BlueTiger
Excellent
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Great work again! This story is coming along nicely. I like the exchange between the two of them about 'the powers that be'; it really leads you on until Mildred reveals that her understanding is completely different from Veronica's. No mistakes that I could see.

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 Comment Written 02-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2018
    Thank you so much, Blue Tiger, for another lovely review! Yes, it's so frustrating for both of them at the moment. I'm delighted you enjoyed this part, thank you! :)) Sandra xx