Achievement:Intensity of CAN!
Yea, I CAN, such say-er succeeds...53 total reviews
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, striking write in its adherence to the prompt and smoothly flowing verse - it solidifies the optimistic approach to life in its clear and definitive message. Best of luck in the contest...
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In my opinion, striking write in its adherence to the prompt and smoothly flowing verse - it solidifies the optimistic approach to life in its clear and definitive message. Best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Hello Evesayshi,
Thank you very much for your so ENCOURAGING words backed by Best of Luck Wishes.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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You are very welcome indeed...Eve
Comment from Rubylou
Hello,
Your strong message is clear from the very first line. It carries throughout the entire piece.
My favorite words are,"...boosting determination."
As a former educator this strikes a chord with me.
Rubylou
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Hello,
Your strong message is clear from the very first line. It carries throughout the entire piece.
My favorite words are,"...boosting determination."
As a former educator this strikes a chord with me.
Rubylou
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Hello Rubylou,
Thank you very much for your so ENCOURAGING comments backed by your favorite words .
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Neonewman
What a great little piece you have crafted for this "I can" contest. I love the artwork you have chosen. Strong image to accompany this strong piece.
God bless
Steve
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What a great little piece you have crafted for this "I can" contest. I love the artwork you have chosen. Strong image to accompany this strong piece.
God bless
Steve
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
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Hello Steve,
Thank you very much for your so ENCOURAGING words backed by Blessings.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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My pleasure.
Comment from w.j.debi
You give us a wise message in a well written form. Can instead of can't will take us so much further and make us so much happier in life.
The artwork is a perfect fit for this poem. Just take off the "not"
Good luck in the contest.
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You give us a wise message in a well written form. Can instead of can't will take us so much further and make us so much happier in life.
The artwork is a perfect fit for this poem. Just take off the "not"
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
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Hello W.J.Devi,
Thank you very much for your so ENCOURAGING words backed by Good Luck Wishes.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
It is refreshing to read a poem, or any writing that expresses the disposition of optimism. In your poem you are saying there are many ways to accomplish something and finding the right way will enable one to have a "can" do attitude and result. In our postmodern society lots of people want to tell us we "can" not. Robert
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It is refreshing to read a poem, or any writing that expresses the disposition of optimism. In your poem you are saying there are many ways to accomplish something and finding the right way will enable one to have a "can" do attitude and result. In our postmodern society lots of people want to tell us we "can" not. Robert
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Hello Robert,
Thank you very much for your so ENCOURAGING words.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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You're welcome!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your contest entry, RP. Great jo with the prompt. Your words flow smoothly with a great message of believing in oneself and not becoming negative. The rhymes are great, too. One has to strive everyday to reach their goals. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
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I enjoyed your contest entry, RP. Great jo with the prompt. Your words flow smoothly with a great message of believing in oneself and not becoming negative. The rhymes are great, too. One has to strive everyday to reach their goals. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
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Hello Jan,
Thank you very much for your so ENCOURAGING words backed by Best Wishes.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about what we can do when we truly believe we can do. When we never consider what we cannot do, we will achieve the success we striving for.
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A very well-written poem about what we can do when we truly believe we can do. When we never consider what we cannot do, we will achieve the success we striving for.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Hello Sandra du Plessis,
Thank you very much for your so ENCOURAGING words.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Gail Denham
It's good to have that positive attitude about life - for sure. God does promise to help us with all our needs, as we stay close to Him. That's the way I understand, "I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me" - I enjoyed your poem. Good reminder.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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It's good to have that positive attitude about life - for sure. God does promise to help us with all our needs, as we stay close to Him. That's the way I understand, "I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me" - I enjoyed your poem. Good reminder.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Hello Gail Denham,
Thank you very much for your so ENCOURAGING words backed by "Good reminder".
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Darlene BoClair
I Can, poetic form, structure and style gives us a chance to be proud of all that we do, we think we can do and all we do no matter of what others say or think. I like how you made this poem your very own to share with the FanStory community. A great well written message for the contest entry.
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I Can, poetic form, structure and style gives us a chance to be proud of all that we do, we think we can do and all we do no matter of what others say or think. I like how you made this poem your very own to share with the FanStory community. A great well written message for the contest entry.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Hello Darlene BoClair,
Thank you very much for your so ENCOURAGING words backed by veiled 'Good Luck Wishes'.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from MISS SHERRY1
Just what we all should adhere to! CAN could and not should never be linked together. You have presented not only a fine poem but a piece of philosophy that many people can use - myself included! Very fine presentation. I wish you the best of luck in this contest.
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Just what we all should adhere to! CAN could and not should never be linked together. You have presented not only a fine poem but a piece of philosophy that many people can use - myself included! Very fine presentation. I wish you the best of luck in this contest.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2019
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Hello Miss Sherry1,
Thank you very much for your so ENCOURAGING words backed by Best of Luck Wishes.
With best wishes,
~ RP
