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Beautiful

A 3-6-9 Poem

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Comment from BethShelby
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This is very good advice you put into your 3-6-9 poem. Of course young people sometimes have to experience life a bit before they really know who they are. By the time one matures, they should know a have developed the self-confidence to be who they are meant to be. That is true beauty.

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 Comment Written 28-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
    Thank you, dear Beth. The beauty of the Lord is seen in you. Thank you for the wonderful review.
    Sal XOs.....
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Sally,

Such a beautiful poem you penned, accompanied by a terrific artwork and video clip.

As we know, beauty is only skin deep. One's true soul may be hidden to some, but shown to others.

Mark

P.S. Please provide me the steps needed to add a video clip to a poem that I have in review for some future Haiku contest. I know how to add artwork from my computer, but don't know the method to add and show a clip, rather than providing its link. THANKS in advance for this info.

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 Comment Written 28-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
    Thank you for the lovely review and compliments, dear Mark. My husband knows HTML codes from his years in the computer industry. He set it up for me in that code, like a shoe with a liner. I just change the liner when I add a new video. You will need to get the step-by-step instructions from Tom the administrator of FanStory. I've pointed a few of our fan friends to him for help. Only recently have I been able to do this by myself, even with my set up. My eyesight is terrible. Thanks again. I hope you get up and running. :)
    Sal xo