Sunlight
When walking in the shady side of the road.48 total reviews
Comment from Boogienights
This is very lovely poetry and it definitely fits the prompt. Perhaps heaven shining it's light down? The imagery you create in your poem is wonderful. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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This is very lovely poetry and it definitely fits the prompt. Perhaps heaven shining it's light down? The imagery you create in your poem is wonderful. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Yes, why not, dear poet, heaven might be nice enough to shine its light on us, mere mortals.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Sunlight, finds that inspiration waits in the gray for the believer to chance the elements and discover what he is seeking.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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This poem, Sunlight, finds that inspiration waits in the gray for the believer to chance the elements and discover what he is seeking.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Thank you Bill. Your remarks are uplifting to me. Blessing.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image.
-You wrote a good poem
with effective imagery,
creating a good word
picture about your walk with
"lofty clouds" and "menaced
bad weather."
-The ending section is good
as you describe the "sliver of light."
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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-Very nice image.
-You wrote a good poem
with effective imagery,
creating a good word
picture about your walk with
"lofty clouds" and "menaced
bad weather."
-The ending section is good
as you describe the "sliver of light."
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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I appreciate your great words for my poem on my faith.
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You are welcome.
Comment from R56Ma3
Sitting out on the back patio or morning walk is something to take the mind off of things. Very uplifting as well as just taking it easy. Very well written! R56ma3
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Sitting out on the back patio or morning walk is something to take the mind off of things. Very uplifting as well as just taking it easy. Very well written! R56ma3
Comment Written 16-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Thank you much for your kinds words. Lovely....
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You're welcome
Comment from mermaids
You have a vivid use of words that takes the reader to another place. I can relate to your poem, I often go for walks out in nature and it is a spiritual experience like your words describe. Your words appeal to the senses.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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You have a vivid use of words that takes the reader to another place. I can relate to your poem, I often go for walks out in nature and it is a spiritual experience like your words describe. Your words appeal to the senses.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Hi, mermaids. Thank you for your warm comments.
Comment from Carmen Ducharme
What a beautiful poem .You are absolutely right .God was sending that sliver of light and warmth to let you know he is always there with us even on the gloomiest of days he keeps us warm! Great job on your poem entry .Good Luck!
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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What a beautiful poem .You are absolutely right .God was sending that sliver of light and warmth to let you know he is always there with us even on the gloomiest of days he keeps us warm! Great job on your poem entry .Good Luck!
Comment Written 16-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Hi, Carmen, thank you so much for your lovely lines.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Elegant and profound--stunning conclusion in startling and fresh turn of phrase--this piece thus ties in nicely with the theme of encouragement--good luck!
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Elegant and profound--stunning conclusion in startling and fresh turn of phrase--this piece thus ties in nicely with the theme of encouragement--good luck!
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Comment Written 16-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Your lines of appreciation gives me a chill...Thank you, Elizabeth.
Comment from Wendy G
Beautiful poem about the simple joys and blessings of life, expressed with lovely imagery. I am sure this will do well in the contest you entered, so best wishes.
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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Beautiful poem about the simple joys and blessings of life, expressed with lovely imagery. I am sure this will do well in the contest you entered, so best wishes.
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Comment Written 16-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
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Hi Cindy, I appreciate stopping to read my words. Nice...
